many families have important traditins that all or most family members share.
what is one of your family traditions and what makes this particular tradition important?
Family is the most important community that everyone is one of its members. Humans born in family, live in family, and share their happiness, sadness, success, and other things in family. Most families have a particular tradition that aid to collecting family members and bond them together more strongly. For example in my family, we have the tradition to get together in last month of the summer in apple orchard.
My grandfather has apple orchards that he inherited from his father. All family get together to harvest these orchard's fruits when they are ripe, as it was tradition in my past generations. But the only aim of this collecting is not to harvest apples; on the other hand we have very fun days and night during that harvest month. All family lives together in the villa at the center of the orchard. We eat every breakfast around a big table all together. Then we began to harvesting. During the day children can play at the shad of trees. The chief fun of the day starts in the evening, when everyone comes back to the villa. Men, women, and children sit and talk about everything. Every person shares his ideas and stories. Children can learn new thing from adults. And adults can remember their happy memories and narrate them to children. Making fire during the nights and drinking tea around it is another desirable part of this tradition.
In addition, this tradition is a chief chain that connects all family together, because nowadays, everyone have a career in city and thus opportunity to meet each other is very rare. But in this month everyone have enough time to share with family.
This is my family's annual tradition, and I am really happy to attend it very year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...e inherited from his father. All family get together to harvest these orchards frui...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'for example', 'in addition', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.283987915408 0.229887763892 124% => OK
Verbs: 0.12084592145 0.158761421928 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0664652567976 0.0866891130778 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0543806646526 0.046263068375 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0634441087613 0.0685040099705 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108761329305 0.118717715034 92% => OK
Participles: 0.012084592145 0.0351676179071 34% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.41097659941 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0302114803625 0.0309702414327 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0996978851964 0.0887237588012 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00906344410876 0.0209618222197 43% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.012084592145 0.0139019557991 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1702.0 2387.08602151 71% => OK
No of words: 296.0 408.028673835 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331081081081 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.22972972973 0.251872472559 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172297297297 0.174417080927 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0878378378378 0.112833075102 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41097659941 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.524397521467 106% => OK
Word variations: 57.6342250628 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.8 20.5533526081 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6977860368 48.84282405 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1 120.699889404 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.5533526081 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.644075263715 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 37.772972973 45.7405998639 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.69620253165 1.45489161554 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27765293197 0.300154397459 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116351574781 0.103427244359 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0872085293196 0.0752933317313 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.442234283806 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.227840507184 0.151897553556 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995139915264 0.114077575197 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910635054938 0.0781384742642 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.274390250694 0.336927656856 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0963408969865 0.067059652881 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198622469731 0.210909579961 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926445028761 0.0618886996521 150% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.