Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples
Traveling in your own country it is always an exciting idea. Whether you have done it before or not it is always a heartwarming experience because every time you will have the opportunity to discover something new. I haven't had this chance yet but I agree with the idea of traveling my own country instead going outside for three mainly reasons.
First of all, visiting your country have some advantages that you need to take into account. For example, no need to worry about the spoken language since it is your own language. This allow you to perfectly communicate during your trip. You can meet new friends, enjoy a movie, visit a museum or simply travel with the companion of a guide without worries. You can grow as a human being.
Secondly, it is always important to get to know your history first. This possibility will increase immeasurably your history knowledge. By doing so you will have the chance to know more in deep your culture, the origins of your civilization, our first ancestors, who were the first conquers, the origin of the cities and your background will be widely expanded. You will enjoy these activities and will feel more relaxed. You won’t have to be stressed about expending a lot of money either.
Finally, another advantage of traveling in your own country will be knowing what to do in case of an emergency. Since you perfectly know the language, no need to be scared. What places you might want to visit if you want to eat; if you feel sick and this require immediately attention you will definitely need to know where to go, or if you feel in danger you will know who to call. Those simple things may scare you if you are visiting a foreign country, but not in your land. It is important to get advice first in case an emergency may occur. For me this is very important. You can grow through traveling.
To conclude, I firmly agree that traveling in my own country instead visiting a foreign destination is better. People benefit more when travelling in their own country because it is safe, rewarming and brings the opportunity to have an unforgettable experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...pportunity to discover something new. I havent had this chance yet but I agree with th...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e of traveling in your own country will be knowing what to do in case of an emergency. Sin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72972972973 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61408222103 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502702702703 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8851242236 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5454545455 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287306892602 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947516686605 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675227905891 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186017132768 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370659032986 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.