Renewable sources of energy will soon replace fossil fuels.
Energy is one essential kind of source for people’ daily life. Without energy, it will be extremely difficult for people. However, nowadays, people tend to increasingly use renewable energy, such as solar energy and moving water. Therefore, I strongly believe that renewable sources of energy will take the place of fossil fuels as the principal source of the world energy.
An advancement the technology makes it possible to explore and employ new forms of energy. With tremendous breakthrough of relative technologies, scientists have been gradually going through the challenges and difficulties of developing renewable energy. In the past, we had no choice but to be in use of the fossil fuels like gasoline, which have been providing us with more benefits. Contrast to in the past, now we have more choices. Thanks to the use of moving water and wind energy, most families choose to try these renewable sources. My family had already used solar energy to home heating. In fact, more and more families and companies start to use like solar energy that kind of energy.
Unlike renewable sources of energy, fossil fuels is exceedingly non-renewable. They are limited in supply and will one day be depleted. From the past to the present, we had run out of a great deal of fossil fuels, such as oil and gases. As is known to us, it takes a long time to form usable coals and oil from plants and animals. Meanwhile, we particularly rely on fossil fuels and use them frequently. With the slow forming process and endless consuming, I believe that fossil fuels will be exhausted fast. Comparing with fossil fuels, renewable sources of energy will not face that sort of difficulties.
Burning fossil fuels releases gases and harmful particles which causes air pollution. Particularly, air pollution results in smog and the degradation of human health and plant growth. On the contrary, renewable sources benefit us a lot. Take Beijing as an example, recent years the smog has become far more serious which has an obvious and critical effect on people’ life. According to a number of investigations, smog is a direct result of using much coals and oil in daily life. Consequently, a mass of various harmful particles and gases are emitted, leading in crucial air pollution. An effective way to change such phenomenon is to make use of renewable sources of energy.
In a word, fossil fuels which have shown many disadvantages compare to renewable energy. The rising popularity of new energy and the improvement of technologies will make it affordable and will substitute for the conventional fossil fuels.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 453, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...tions, smog is a direct result of using much coals and oil in daily life. Consequent...
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Line 4, column 684, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ake use of renewable sources of energy. In a word, fossil fuels which have shown...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, while, in fact, kind of, sort of, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05324074074 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82130157623 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497685185185 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7450529598 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8518518519 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331966357125 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100350021579 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11372696485 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224132404992 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112532673062 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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