Should government invest more on improving roads or improving public transports.
Government's decision to invest whether on improving roads and highways or on improving public transportation totally depends on the condition of roads and highways in the country or the particular place. If I am obliged to choose any one , taking reference of my own country , I think government should spend more on improving public transportation. I feel this way because of two main reasons , which I will explore in following paragraphs.
Firstly, There are not sufficient means of public transportation. The existing ones are mostly late and often fully loaded. it is too difficult to travel in public buses. it not only delays people work but people are often tired when they reach their destination because of the long standing they did on the bus. only the people from first or second bus station gets seats. The daily hustle to work and college by public buses is truly pathetic. For example , I had a friend in college , who used to come by public bus .Somedays he used to arrive on time but mostly he used to late for lecture and the reason is buses not arriving on time or the particular bus on which he was coming had some problem. due to less number of buses , the time between two buses were half hour . this had been the problem of many students and working employee. so, government should invest on increasing and improving public transport.
In addition , many people tend to buy personal vehicles due to the ineffective pubic transport. this causes a serious problems like pollution and traffic jam. Moreover, existing public vehicles are too old and causes more pollution. In recent years, pollution has reached to the extreme level. For instance it was last year, Our city reported very bad pollution that affected the the respiratory health of many people .it was so worse that government ordered to close every schools, college and industries. The increased private vehicle can be reduced by enhancing the public transport service. Most research shows that people switch to private vehicles only because of the problems that exist in public transport. so , better public transport will definitely be able to attract those private vehicle owner towards it. that way pollution can be reduced to a greater level.
In conclusion , Government should give more emphasis to improve the public transport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00777202073 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67244147254 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533678756477 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.223895543 48.9658058833 113% => OK
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Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
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Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
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Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.114557699803 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181038856066 0.0737576698707 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329953457392 0.150856017488 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.193146998285 0.0645574589148 299% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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