Should high school students wear uniforms?
Wearing uniforms in one of the challenging issues among students these days. Despite of the fact that large number of students are oppose with this wearing , but it is sometimes impose from the school’s rules. If this oblige eliminate from the schools rules it will be uphold from the students society. In my view wearing uniforms is a unbearable force due to its imposition and dead color.
The main reason is that mankind always evade from imposition. This issue is a reason that can influence on students intuition about school, especially on their education and learning. For instance when I was elementary student, wearing uniforms was mandatory. so every day I had to wear that disgusting clothes and be present in school. In the primary months due to its novelty it did not move about bad feeling but after the five month passes it became a repetitive and due to the principle’s imposition about the uniforms, I couldn’t change that attires. Also this kind of coating was surveyed by our teacher every day to punishing whom kept away of this rule! As you can see this inflexible rule engender a feeling like disgust as I mentioned above.
Another reason is the color that utilized in these uniforms was so dead. This problem directly effected the student’s morality. Dark navy blue is the most conventional color that students wear during their presence in school in our city as I did. This darkness decrease self confidence, motivation and delightfulness. As evidence of this claim I had a friend in high school that his mother had died in the autumn’s primary, so he was in a bad morality condition but as I said previously he had to wear uniforms every day and that pokey color conduct him to be sad and didn’t let him to adopt that stricken fact. I myself believe that if the choosing of coating give to the students under their parents supervision, it height sense of choosing in them and we will not confront with the condition that boring color destroy their enthusiasm and motivation of going to school.
In sum though, some may oppose about these intuitions but I came across with them practically. Not only this force should be eliminate but also if it is not a possible task, then the color of these uniforms must be change. Every school that want to encounter with education growth between their students should consider these issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, thus, for instance, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87714987715 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74397626765 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518427518428 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2577585481 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.473684211 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4210526316 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63157894737 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350023395054 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111202668581 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811236557434 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222746329878 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693345966665 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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