Should one make an important decision alone?
Decision-making is a common phenomenon each one of us undergoes in our daily life. its magnitude varies from trivial issues like choice of a daily wardrobe to making a crucial corporate decision involving millions of dollars. A decision may have its implications ranging from a single person to the entire universe. Hence it is very important to making a correct decision. But I have a mixed felling when it comes to the choice of making decision collectively or as a single person. I feel that the decision making process cannot have its hard and fast rules but has to be tailor made to suit a situation. Hence a decision may have to be personally made or in consultation with others as demanded by the situation.
I would like to analyze the decision-making methodology in its tow ramifications, one involving personal interests and the other for common issues involving business, political or environmental significance.
Every person is different and has the rights to make his own destiny. It is this quality of uniqueness which makes the mankind so special. We are the best judges when it comes to making personal decisions, for no one can understand a persona better than himself. There are many things in life such as selection of a life partner, or choosing a career that are specific to the taste and liking of an individual. It is always useful to hear the opinion of our well-wishers regarding the deciding issue. However the individual should take final decision after carefully weighing all options. It not only gives us the self-confidence, but also institutes the responsibility in us to live by our decision.
Things are quiet different when it comes to decision making involving business, political or environmental issues. The decision made in these cases has serious consequences than that of the personal issues. It puts at stake the wealth, safety and future of many others directly or indirectly involved in these issues. It is here the concept of teamwork, Special knowledge etc come to picture.
When taking decision on a business activity, it is always better to have a brainstorming session of all the involved persons to discuss about the issue. It gives the best possible decision after carefully analyzing all the possibilities, with the concurrence of the team. Also all the members involved in the decision-making are clear about their individual roles in contributing to the success of the decision.
There are some cases, where expert knowledge and experiences required in taking the decisions. In such cases one can resort to the help of the experts or the consulting agencies for the correct solutions. The decision suggested by the consultants can be expected to be more suitable, since most decisions suggested by the experts/consultants are either by scientific methods or based on a reliable statistical data of the past. Consultants are available in almost all fiedls such as engineering, finance, law, insurance etc to name a few.
Also when it comes to taking decisions that are of international importance, the governing bodies such as the United Nations Organization insist on a Veto for decision-making. This method of decision-making ensures that the decisions are in the interests of the member countries.
Hence going by the above decisions, one can take the liberty to choose by self when it comes to personal issues. However, when it involves decisions beyond the individual, one should always be a part of the decision making team constructively facilitating the decision, which lies in the best interests of everyone involved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
... one of us undergoes in our daily life. its magnitude varies from trivial issues li...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...a single person to the entire universe. Hence it is very important to making a correc...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... to be tailor made to suit a situation. Hence a decision may have to be personally ma...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...l-wishers regarding the deciding issue. However the individual should take final decisi...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ties, with the concurrence of the team. Also all the members involved in the decisio...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...e, law, insurance etc to name a few. Also when it comes to taking decisions that ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, as to, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 52.1666666667 163% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3015.0 1977.66487455 152% => OK
No of words: 586.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14505119454 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92010537223 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14806827149 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459044368601 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 987.3 618.680645161 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.959614256 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63333333333 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319471526825 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857927917507 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651258599611 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153912255482 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594936058105 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 86.8835125448 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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