Should parents be obligated to immunize their children against common childhood diseases? Or do individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children? What is your view of this practice?
Every infant needs and support of their parents from any danger at his/her early stage. Any disease can be fatal for infants because their immunity system is just started and yet to improve. So, according to me, parents should be obligated to immunize their children for childhood diseases. I will elaborate on my reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.
First, vaccination helps as a safeguard against various common childhood diseases. However, children do not have a strong immune system that makes them vulnerable to diseases. Therefore, they must get vaccinated before and after birth. Additionally, numerous countries provide vaccines with pout any cost. For instance, India started an organization to give polio vaccines to each child an entire country. Moreover, all governments should start a grant to make available vaccines at a cheap rate.
Second, sometimes parents do not immunize their children because of the lack of education. All government should start organizations that spread awareness about the benefits of vaccination and the hazards of diseases. If one child does not get immunized and suffers from any disability only because of lack of awareness. Children are not only holding the future of their parents, but they also hold the future of the nation. Also, disabilities cost money and time both for parents. If a child is not immunized, then he/she gets sick and that costs a lot more for parents to save from that disease.
Lastly, vaccination eliminated numerous diseases that severely disabled people a few decades ago. For example, smallpox does not exist worldwide, so now children’s do not have to take shots for smallpox. The government spends a lot of human resources and money to do research to immunize children from diseases. If children do not get vaccinated, then all resources get waste.
Let’s put in a nutshell, I strongly believe that parents should be obligated to immunize their children because it helps to protect the upcoming generation, and also make parents sincere towards their responsibilities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2996941896 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8587106238 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562691131498 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1195045329 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5238095238 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90476190476 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341390725004 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102790756379 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111603610946 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212059316112 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741290012069 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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