Should parents encourage their kids to have jobs during school?
With the development of society, parents need to pay attention to the growth of their kids. There is some argument about whether parents should encourage kids to have jobs during school education or not. From my point of view, parents should encourage kids to participate in working environments. It is an effective way to help children learn responsibility, manage money, and gain useful experience.
First of all, when children have a job, they can easily learn responsibilities from their work. It is not difficult to understand that when children work as an employee, they must follow environmental regulations at their company. For example, when I worked as a fresher at 2359 Media Vietnam for 3 months, I got up and went to my company on time. It cannot be denied that children join a real working environment, which will provide them with a lot of good opportunities.
Second, working as a part-time job can help kids learn how to manage money. It is apparent that students usually receive monthly money from their parents, and they do not realize that their parents work hard in difficult conditions to find the money. Therefore, when kids work, they will know that making money is very difficult, and they will make a few wiser decisions before buying something expensive. As we can see, it would be a challenge for kids when they become adults without the skills of financial education.
Last but not least, joining working environments early can support teenagers in building valuable work experience. The fact is that nowadays, most companies require their employees to have the ability to cooperate with teammates on their projects. For instance, when students work at a company, we can have more opportunities to show our value, such as communicating, presenting, and listening. As can be seen, when teenagers take part in real work, it can help them develop more soft skills and get valuable experience.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that parents want their kids to have a great future. They should encourage their children to work during the school day. This will help them understand their responsibilities, manage their finances, and archive more helpful experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07123287671 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89123016373 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53698630137 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5622644318 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.4210526316 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2105263158 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328399604063 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122425444616 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14529428244 0.0737576698707 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231685834632 0.150856017488 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174742079905 0.0645574589148 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.