should restaurant be build in your neighborhood?
What do you think if there will be a restaurant built near your neighborhood? People may have different opinions. Some people will be against it because of too much noise, potential pollution, etc. Other people, however, will welcome it
very much. As far as I am concerned, I like to have a restaurant built in my neighborhood.
In the first place, a restaurant will make my daily life more convenient, As we know, cooking is a very important thing in people's life and it is also very timeconsuming. When I come home from work and feel tired, I normally want to eat out. If a restaurant is very far away from my house, I have to give up that idea because I do not want to waste my time and energy on the road. As a result, I have to cook myself. What a pain. If there is a restaurant nearby, it will make a difference. What I need to do is to take a leisure walk to the restaurant, sit down, make an order, enjoy my dinner and then, the most important thing, and leave without cleaning the mess,
In the second place, I have another good place to meet my friends. Sometimes, meeting friends at home is tedious, especially meeting Some friends that I am not very familiar with. If there is a restaurant nearby, I can invite them to go to the restaurant, While drinking and eating. We will have more topics to talk And the beautiful environment of the restaurant will make the talk more pleasant.
In addition, I can make more friends in the restaurant. A restaurant the best place to meet new people if you are not shy. If the restaurant is just within walking distance of my home. I will be there more frequently and have more chances to know more people.
In conclusion, I will support the plan of building a restaurant near my home not only because a restaurant can make my life more convenient, but also because it can be a ideal place to meet friends.
- TPO3 : You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response.Your response will be judged onn the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage. Typically, 3
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- Directions: You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response.Your response will be judged onn the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage. Typic 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to meet new people if you are not shy. If the restaurant is just within walking d...
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Line 6, column 169, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... convenient, but also because it can be a ideal place to meet friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38150289017 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67237130251 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459537572254 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.3747283807 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188368089603 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630060561463 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807562351862 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121452290958 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552348783433 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.