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Independent Writing
Question 1
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Directions: You have 30 minutes to plan and write your response. Typically an effective response will be 300 words at least.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
A person should never make an important decision alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Word count: 393
Making a decision inn our life is aparamount thing for every indivitual in this wold. Whether, person should make that decision alone or share their relative or friends to make this decision or not. This can be weighed in many aspects. Some people believe that important decision should be taken alone. Other choose to share other for making this decision. Admittedly, any one can decide what to do independently. He do that to keep his privecy. In my opinion I believe take advices from other people to make an important decision is a crucial thing to reach to a correct result. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reason to explain my point of view in that subject.
To begin with, first reaon come to my mind, sharing others like our parent in making chioce is very helpful. parents are the people who love their kids most. they know their strength and weakness. Therefore, they can give their young children veryb important advices in any feild of life. This is acompelling example from our real live. When I was in the high school, I wanted to be teacher. However, my dad knew how I was smart in my academic subject. Therefore, he advice my to attend dental school, althoigh, teaching is a very important in our kid live, I understan that I can do other thing whichn is more worth it. We can figure out how taking advices from our parant is helpful.
SEcond, anyone in this life need to increase his horizon and knowledge, This can be acheived by communicating with other, especialy, those who have experiences and skills. When we share our friend or manager without decision this enable us to choose correct choice. In instance, my friend ask me to help her to decide which is better when she attend college, live with her parent or in dorm. Due to my previous experience I adviced her to live in dorm. This is becuasr lifing in dorm is convenience to her. This is mainly because, it is near her campus. In addation, there are many students who can help her with her study.
In conclusion, sharing people in making an important decision is a paramount thing. This is based on expositions that mentioned above. This is very helpful for every on. furthermore, we can make a perfect choice.
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Independent Writing
Question 1
00:00
Directions: You have 30 minutes to plan and write your response. Typically an effective response will be 300 words at least.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
A person should never make an important decision alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Word count: 393
Making a decision inn our life is aparamount thing for every indivitual in this wold. Whether, person should make that decision alone or share their relative or friends to make this decision or not. This can be weighed in many aspects. Some people believe that important decision should be taken alone. Other choose to share other for making this decision. Admittedly, any one can decide what to do independently. He do that to keep his privecy. In my opinion I believe take advices from other people to make an important decision is a crucial thing to reach to a correct result. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reason to explain my point of view in that subject.
To begin with, first reaon come to my mind, sharing others like our parent in making chioce is very helpful. parents are the people who love their kids most. they know their strength and weakness. Therefore, they can give their young children veryb important advices in any feild of life. This is acompelling example from our real live. When I was in the high school, I wanted to be teacher. However, my dad knew how I was smart in my academic subject. Therefore, he advice my to attend dental school, althoigh, teaching is a very important in our kid live, I understan that I can do other thing whichn is more worth it. We can figure out how taking advices from our parant is helpful.
SEcond, anyone in this life need to increase his harizone and knowledege, This can be acheived by communicating with other, especialy, those who have experiences and skills. When we share our friend or maneger withour decision this enable us to choose correct choice. In instance, my friend ask me to help her to decide which is better when she attend college, live with her parent or in dorm. Due to my previous experience I adviced her to live in dorm. This is becuasr lifing in dorm is convenience to her. This is mainly because, it is near her campus. In addation, there are many students who can help her with her study.
In conclusion, sharing people in making an important decission is a paramount thing. This is based on expositions that mentioned above. This is very helpful for every on. furthermore, we can make a perfect choice.
Warning There are still some problems in the app. Will tackle them soon.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-07-26 | talelaldabous | 70 | view |
| 2021-06-05 | talelaldabous | 70 | view |
- Many decisions in our life should be taken carefully and is a specifict time this is due to their importance to draw our future correctly A ny delay in takeing any decision may has a negative effect on our life The question is whether in the past our kids 70
- Many situation in our life need from as to make a decision Making this decision has a crucial influence of our future Whether young people in the past depend completely on their parents to make such important decision and today youngsters are more indepen 66
- Teachers are paramount part in students life They have influential impact on education process The question is whether teachers should share social or political concepts with their student or not This can be weighed in different aspects In my perspective 60
- The reading and lecture about the old fossil of Tyrannosaurus The writer claims these fossils still contain remains of actul tissues lije blood vessels red blood cells and collagen matrix he elaborates three evidences T he lecturer casts doubt on claim ma 70
- Now a days there is ahuge technology revolution in many field of life One of the important one is the computers which is devise used in a lot of field kids usualy play games by using computer in my openion playing games these game is a waste of time In th 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Typically,
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Suggestion:
...upport your answer. Word count: 393 Making a decision inn our life is aparam...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt decision should be taken alone. Other choose to share other for making this de...
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Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...r for making this decision. Admittedly, any one can decide what to do independently. He...
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Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...can decide what to do independently. He do that to keep his privecy. In my opinion...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Parents
...arent in making chioce is very helpful. parents are the people who love their kids most...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...re the people who love their kids most. they know their strength and weakness. There...
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Message: Did you mean 'advise' (verb) instead of advice (noun)?
Suggestion: advise
...t in my academic subject. Therefore, he advice my to attend dental school, althoigh, t...
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Suggestion:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to correct'
Suggestion: to correct
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'attends'.
Suggestion: attends
... her to decide which is better when she attend college, live with her parent or in dor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, at least, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76394849785 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52434589578 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530042918455 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 20.6003584229 175% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9194150804 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.6666666667 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9444444444 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210794411255 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535374273554 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11361891035 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138540803461 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167919929631 0.0645574589148 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.44 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.