Social media, a new platform for people to express their opinions that emerged in the past decade, have attracted people from every field of life. From delegates voting in the general assembly of the United Nations to old ladies working in small retailers, almost everyone in our society uses social media. Whereas some people believe that it is unreasonable to express ideas on social media, other believe social media serves as a tremendous place for people to convey their voice. From my perspective, social media is the perfect place to express one’s opinion as it provides its users with feedback that originates from various places and can enable people render
The major reason to explain my propensity is that social network endows people with chances to receive different types of feedback from their opinions. The essence of expressing one’s idea is certainly not to simply address it. It is about having people to echo with the ideas expressed, and social media can make such thing happen easily. For example, when some significant event happens in the international community, there tend to be a fair amount of people giving out their own opinions in different languages through social media. The users sometimes have debates or even formal group discussions that can last for weeks. For those who are involved, they are endowed with chances to have a comprehensive understanding towards how people in another region may analyze a problem through their expressions. In other words, social media is a place where people exchange opinions and consequently be affected by other’s ideas.
Another major supporting reason is that social media provides people with chances to express themselves on topics that other people share same the interests. It is very common for people to feel alone when it comes to a certain hobby they are interested in. For instance, people who love watching old films may find it hard to express their feelings over a movie with others, since others may have never seen such movie. Yet, with the advent of social media, people with non-mainstream hobbies can also can find others with similar interests online with ease. It is certainly a marvelous experience for people to share thoughts over their favorite things with those who also have a comprehensive understanding.
However, some people may argue that expressing opinions on social media shall be avoided, as there are malicious users that will harass others for fun. Admittedly, such cases do exist. Cyber violence have always been a severe problem for the Internet community. The situation, however, have been soothed a lot recently. A large majority of social media adopted auto moderators, which can monitor and eliminate improper behavior immediately, as an approach to counter with malicious users. Thus, it is reasonable to suggest that such downside may no longer be exist in the near future.
In conclusion, although there are problems that damages people’s experience in expressing ideas online, it can be solved. Therefore, expressing opinions on social media is still a good option for people for the feedback and convenience it provides.
- For the successful development of a country, the government should focus its budget on young children's education rather than on universities. 83
- the significance of art education 73
- Honest is the important quality in choosing a leader 90
- Honest is the important quality in choosing a leader 90
- Public speaking course should be mandatory in college 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 672, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ious places and can enable people render The major reason to explain my propensit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2668.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 510.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23137254902 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66509469238 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503921568627 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 846.9 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2810995593 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1739130435 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69565217391 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207521980454 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760078472463 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711202155755 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153869830102 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556403034458 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.