Some believe that upbringing of child is responsibility of both parents. Agree or disagree? Provide details and example to support your response.
It is ubiquitous that, children are brought by parents from birth until they mature. Fortunate are the children, when they get love and affection from bothparents because lack of care can lead children to astray . I agree with the statement that it is
obligation of both parents to foster a child for the following reasons:
Pschologically, single parent will be overwhlemed when he or she has to face challenges in upbrigning of child.
Everyone knows that child is known by the family he belongs to, if inheritance is from bad surrounding that child
is going to suffer emotionally. Increasing divorce cases has created great impact on single parent's mind,
being pschylogically unstable thery thrive hard to fullfil obligations towards thier child.
As result child may exhibit ill behavior, depression and disinterest in academic education.
Being, devoid from love and affection from both child tends to allure by drug abuse and criminal activities.
On the other hand, both parennts can provide amicable atmosphere by maintaning good harmonay,
thereby fostering child with optimism and affection.
Financially, living in this modern world is not cheap. It is undoubtedly true that
single parents struggle very hard to even satisfy basic necessities of living. Perfect balance can
be obtained when both parents sacrifice their time and effort for proper nourishment of child. Male parent
need to work to accomplish living, and other expenses related to child's education, while famale parent need
to take responisbility of household chored. Through this setting, balance diet and good quality education
can be offered which are prerequites for healthy life and potential.Thus, there is stringent need for both
parents to share tasks for shaping kids career.
Socially, single parent children are not pleasantly welcomed in the society. Most parents do not want their
children to befriend with such kids, they are seen in a condescending manner. This terrible experience, can cause
deteriorating social and communicative skills. On the other hand, when kids come to party with their
both of their parents, scenerio differs they are greeted friendly. We live in the complex interpedence
life, so providing camaraderie to kid is key to inculate confidence, intergrity and co-operation with others
of same age. As a result it is responsbility of both parents to expose kids to social life.
After scrutinizing both sides of promt, it is worth that child upbrining is dpendent on both parents.
Child needs support psychologically, socially and financially and it is very troublesome to take responsibility by
single parent. Hence, better childhood inthe vicinity of love by both parents
is the stage for progression of child in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, thus, while, as to, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2357.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4686774942 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96743640168 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582366589327 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0810546845 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.136363636 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5909090909 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 27.0 4.53405017921 595% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150877143892 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485917215251 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474433990518 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0461650936456 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437414113684 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 86.8835125448 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.