This easy going to discus about the merits and demerits of wearing uniform in the school, and, what kind of policy supposed to a school incorporate in their policy. There are lot of advantages is there by wearing uniform. Let us go through each in every benefits of wearing uniform in detail.
First of all, it gives equal status to all the students irrespective of where the born, what kind of his or her parent's job. For example, some of them earn more than 1000 of dollar everyone, some, they cannot afford for the rich dresses for their kids, that's make them feel more bad about the parents. It should not be like that, whereas, wearing uniform eliminate these kinds of conflict. Students also feel that they are all one regardless of race,economy, social status and religion.
Secondly, it gives the identity for the students no matter where they are, because by seeing the uniform people can recognize them every easily. For instant, second grade school kid who missing in functional hall, teachers can find out the student quickly by their uniform. Not only that,even the teacher can identify student's class by using different color of the uniform. Even though it restrict the student priority from choice dress that they want, still worthy to wear the uniform. yes, it's true that they feel bore by wearing one color for the through out the week.
Thirdly, it make sure the security of the students. Assume that, some unknown kids from surrounding entering into the school and making some kind disturbs to original student, during such kind of circumstances, this system will protect student from catastrophic events. Further, It gives the confident for the parent like their children in safe hand. It must be like that isn't it?. Some times, parents may feel that they are not able to see their kids in colorful dresses, that makes little embarrassing parent those who really want spend more time to make kids more stylish and fashionable.
Finally, it give good reputation to the school management, For example, In our native place, Nadar school very famous in the town. By seeing their uniform, museum director use to first priority to see the articles those who are coming from particular school when compare with other school.
To sum up, even though there is disadvantages there in wearing the uniform, the advantages are more and precises for the student who wearing uniform. So, the advantages overweight the demerits of it. So, School should follow the policy of wearing uniform.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, whereas, for example, kind of, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2088.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94786729858 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37473865123 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526066350711 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2956106253 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9090909091 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25528030615 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825818941174 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772607713145 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158289378866 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603036580179 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.