Both reading and the lecture are about the treating Chevalier de Seingalt document as an effective historical source on European history. The reading claims that his document cannot be a valid information. The lecturer casts doubt that the reading says. She thinks that Chevalier de Seingalt needs to considered seriously.
The author of this reading believes that the record is contradiction by borrow the money even though he is known as rich who enjoys parties and gambling. However, the lecturer says that he sold goods as a first so that he need to borrow money before he got pay back.
The reading says that the conversation with famous writer Voltaire in the material cannot be accurate because the document written long time after the conversation. The speaker points out that the dialogue had confirmed by the witness when he writing.
The passage explains that Chevalier escape from a notorious prison by make a hole in the ceiling with a metal is available and he was close with politician by giving bribe. But, she disagree with the reading because other prisoners at that time did more than him. The fact proved from the government document which is about fixing the jail because of that
- 51 What change would make your hometown more appealing to people your age Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 100
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school Use specific reasons and examples to support your position 47
- TPO-10 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard explaining how they cast doubt on points made in the reading In 1939 David O Selznick produced a film of Margaret Mitchell s Pulitzer Prize winning novel Gone with the Wind The movie proved to be amo 80
- Government should spend money on children s education rather than universities 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'writes'.
Suggestion: writes
...ue had confirmed by the witness when he writing. The passage explains that Chevalier...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rmed by the witness when he writing. The passage explains that Chevalier escape ...
^^^
Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'disagrees'.
Suggestion: disagrees
...th politician by giving bribe. But, she disagree with the reading because other prisoner...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 1373.03311258 73% => OK
No of words: 203.0 270.72406181 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97044334975 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5325755078 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600985221675 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 419.366225166 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6905272547 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7272727273 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 7.06452816374 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263436128223 0.272083759551 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918618789196 0.0996497079465 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480906515262 0.0662205650399 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144725024465 0.162205337803 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236783957417 0.0443174109184 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 63.6247240618 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.