When it is time to eat, we are in agony between eating outside or inside. Both have advantages. However, I prefer eating food at home.
First of all, eating inside our home is healthier. I have seen a TV program that shows the dirty side of a restaurant. They were using rotten groceries. In addition, they kept their groceries in a wrong way. After the closing time, they did not clean their kitchen well. Not all restaurants are like that, but after i saw this program, I was shocked. I cannot believe the restaurant’s condition of cleanliness that time.
Second, we can save money. Restaurants are almost expensive, even in village. Furthermore, the amount of food is small. It is not as large as that value that spend. Hence, it is a waste of money.
Third, it can help us in our future. In the future, we become adult and independent from our parents. We should cook by ourselves. Cooking alone early is good to live independently. It is a significant point in our future that we can do something by ourselves.
As a result, eating inside is better than eating outside. Because there are many benefits about our health, money, and future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, third, well, in addition, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 1977.66487455 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 203.0 407.700716846 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74384236453 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68690199948 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64039408867 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 618.680645161 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 20.1344086022 45% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.2818755678 48.9658058833 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 43.7727272727 100.406767564 44% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.22727272727 20.6045352989 45% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172419340724 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04859913016 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104069851819 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103329843029 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104950960361 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 11.7677419355 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.8 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.44 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.0537634409 56% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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