Some people are very organized, while other people are not so organized. Which type of person are you? Support your respopnse with specific example.
Both being quite orginazed and being relaxed can be possible for a person in life. However, instead of being organized, being relaxed is not my cup of tea. Thus, I prefer being organized and well ordered as it provides being succesful, I like creating plans and applying them and I dislike spontaneous actions.
Success has always been my destination throughout my life. However, I believe that without being well organized, it is not possible to achieve. If I organize my stuffs and arrange my program in order, then it is more clear to realize the way going to destination. Additionally, it saves time since the steps are known. Time consumption decreases thank to organizing. Therefore, obtaining the success becomes more clear. For example, I usually have to create some projects form y courses. Therefore, planning and organizing the order of steps are vital for a strong project. However, What if I don’t arrange my program and steps of the projet? Then, a stunning output never exists. Eventually, being organized is significant for clear and succesful consequences.
Moreover, one of my hobbies are planning something for future and obtain them in life. I plan my program before weeks of the date of it. After fixing it, the preparation commences to be occured and all the needs for the program are supplied orderly. Therefore, up to date of the program, everthing is ready to be done and we just enjoy. Last year in winter, we decided to go for skiing to a mountain. However, we didn’t know how to prepare ourselves. I searched for it and found out what we needed. After arrangement, we enjoyed skiing instead of freezing in the snow.
Finally, spontaneous actions are abysmal for me since I don’t like surprises. I feel nervous if I have to cope with a situation that I don’t feel ready about. Even it is something light or easy and I am able to challenge it, I, indeed, fail as I feel nervous. Nevertheless, if I had some preparations or infrasutracture about the subject, I believe I can challenge it. Therefore, being organized is affecting considerably my way of life.
On the whole, it is crucial to be organized before commencing a subject for process of it. As being succesful is easier, I love creating plans and I dislike unpredictibility I prefer being organized.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, i feel, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9283887468 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99043155894 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503836317136 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3228851767 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.4482758621 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4827586207 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86206896552 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0421305651079 0.236089414692 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0129654327231 0.076458572812 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253372104609 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0285339642087 0.150856017488 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153040893443 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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