Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Earth has a crucial role in our lives. The place we walk and actually life directly affects in our quality of life. Some people believe that human activities were helpful for the Earth for making a convenient place for life. Others disagree. In my view, mankind made a lot of harmful activities that damaged the Earth for two main reasons.
First, human activities lead to the appearance of global warming in the Earth. Global warming cause a variety of harmful damages for our planet. Using fossil fuel, deforestation, and so forth made the average global temperature one centigrade higher than past. For example, higher temperature endangered the ocean habitat such as sponch, fishes, and so on. Also global warming cause a lot of fires in jungles and forests in hot days. The latest one was Amazon in Brazil, that damaged life of a lot of animals. As you can see, human activities cause a global problem for the entire habitat in the Earth.
Second, human activities polluted all the essential parts of the Earth. Those include air, water and soil. People easily throw their waste material on the nature such as rivers, seas, oceans, jungles, and so forth. These waste materials damage all the habitat in the earth. For instance, people used to drive to their work by their car regardless of the level of air pollution in the atmosphere. They do not care about the future of the Earth. They only think about themselves and current conditions. Or people who pollute water resources, they ignore the fact that next world war will be to have access drinkable water. Therefore, humankind cause very serious damages to the earth.
In sum, we must notice that human activities not only do the temperature of the Earth higher, but those also made an extensive pollutant entire the Earth. It is suggested that these activities controlled by an international organization.
- Do you agree or disagree? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and Televisions have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. 76
- It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 76
- Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...maged the Earth for two main reasons. First, human activities lead to the appe...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...itat such as sponch, fishes, and so on. Also global warming cause a lot of fires in ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94303797468 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53379655457 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544303797468 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5752768735 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262454548895 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771182161329 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666706245665 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164687768389 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454624000198 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.