Do you agree or disagree? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Nowadays, governments try to set some order of rules in order to bring more enjoyable life for their society. As I am concerned these rules do not bring any limitation to none of the member of countries because not only are these rules updated based on circumstance, but they are also developing under pressure of public opinion.
The first reason which should be mentioned here is that rules are under developing day to day by governments in order to improve public image of countries. For example, they consider new rules in paramount or congruous to permit driving car in younger age, or they allow teenagers to become independent from their parents in younger ages rather than past. Therefore, rules are more flexible for young people in comparison with last few decades.
Another reason which should be pointed out is that young people are using networks and social media more and more. Thus, they use its power in order to increase pressure on unfavorable rules. For instance, whenever governments want to consider new rule against women's bicycle driving, most of people especially youth, use the power of social media to create campaigns against the new rule. They tweet their dissatisfaction by using hashtags, or write their own ideas on their social media profile, or change their profile picture by one unity meaning. Eventually, they can change the rules or completely ignore them. As a result, rules can not restrict youth in despite of past.
Last but not the least, the level of public awareness in issues is speared into younger people, so rules can not limit them as much as past.
In final analysis, young people are not limited by firm rules. Finally, it is suggested that governments consider rules based on the community in order to obtain the best result of social behavior among people which leads to decrease need for firm rules.
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- It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and Televisions have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. 76
- Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ew rule against womens bicycle driving, most of people especially youth, use the power of soci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94249201278 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49568010647 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539936102236 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.561704444 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131489256121 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547551175115 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373465927723 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775049847179 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228504749255 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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