Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Other believe that success result from careful planning. What is your opinion?Since the dawn of civilization, success is one of the greatest and important life goals for every human being all around the globe. Indeed, ever mature human being has to admit that success will be a blank dream without difficulties. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that success comes from luck or chance. Other, on the other hand, take a radically different view and allege that meticulous decisions will bring success. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, to the extent that my personal perspective is concerned being successful totally depend on people and surrounding environment. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that majorities of people by nature like to be successful and bend over backwards in order to reach their life goals. Scientifically speaking, experience has shown us that successful people always have had plan for their future and hardly do something without sound decisions. In fact, taking risks in life may come up with unforeseen events. As a matter of fact, the more precise plans, the more confident people will achieve when they do not take chances into consideration. Delving further into the issue reveal that although taking risks and being lucky play an important role in success, crowds of people are willing to ensure their future through making exact plans in their everyday life. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country show that if people do not make plans for their future, they will run into a huge problem and overwhelmed by stress. In order to diminish stress people should make sure they have suitable plans for their activities.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that making careful plan not only can predict future activities but also can provide an opportunity for people to enhance their self-confidence. Broadly speaking, taking risks and conduct works through chance and luck represent that people suffer from paucity of confident and are not able to do their works by a sense of assuredness. To put it in other word, make a sound decision prior to doing a works not only can promote self-confidence and self- esteem but also can make people responsible. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, sometimes make a plan could not work effectively and people should take risks in order to do their best. Indeed, in some case, many opportunities happen by chance and make a sound decision will not work. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, carry out works through chances or plans have its own merits and demerits. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that not until people make a plan or make a sound decision before doing works, will not they gain a proper results. Additionally, make a careful decision will patronize people to improve their self- confidence and being self-sufficient person. I highly suggest that people in order to be successful, should being aware of unpredicted problems.
Since the dawn of civilization, success is one of the greatest and important life goals for every human being all around the globe. Indeed, ever mature human being has to admit that success will be a blank dream without difficulties. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that success comes from luck or chance. Other, on the other hand, take a radically different view and allege that meticulous decisions will bring success. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, to the extent that my personal perspective is concerned being successful totally depend on people and surrounding environment. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that majorities of people by nature like to be successful and bend over backwards in order to reach their life goals. Scientifically speaking, experience has shown us that successful people always have had plan for their future and hardly do something without sound decisions. In fact, taking risks in life may come up with unforeseen events. As a matter of fact, the more precise plans, the more confident people will achieve when they do not take chances into consideration. Delving further into the issue reveal that although taking risks and being lucky play an important role in success, crowds of people are willing to ensure their future through making exact plans in their everyday life. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country show that if people do not make plans for their future, they will run into a huge problem and overwhelmed by stress. In order to diminish stress people should make sure they have suitable plans for their activities.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that making careful plan not only can predict future activities but also can provide an opportunity for people to enhance their self-confidence. Broadly speaking, taking risks and conduct works through chance and luck represent that people suffer from paucity of confident and are not able to do their works by a sense of assuredness. To put it in other word, make a sound decision prior to doing a works not only can promote self-confidence and self- esteem but also can make people responsible. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, sometimes make a plan could not work effectively and people should take risks in order to do their best. Indeed, in some case, many opportunities happen by chance and make a sound decision will not work. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, carry out works through chances or plans have its own merits and demerits. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that not until people make a plan or make a sound decision before doing works, will not they gain a proper results. Additionally, make a careful decision will patronize people to improve their self- confidence and being self-sufficient person. I highly suggest that people in order to be successful, should being aware of unpredicted problems.
Since the dawn of civilization, success is one of the greatest and important life goals for every human being all around the globe. Indeed, ever mature human being has to admit that success will be a blank dream without difficulties. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that success comes from luck or chance. Other, on the other hand, take a radically different view and allege that meticulous decisions will bring success. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, to the extent that my personal perspective is concerned being successful totally depend on people and surrounding environment. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that majorities of people by nature like to be successful and bend over backwards in order to reach their life goals. Scientifically speaking, experience has shown us that successful people always have had plan for their future and hardly do something without sound decisions. In fact, taking risks in life may come up with unforeseen events. As a matter of fact, the more precise plans, the more confident people will achieve when they do not take chances into consideration. Delving further into the issue reveal that although taking risks and being lucky play an important role in success, crowds of people are willing to ensure their future through making exact plans in their everyday life. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country show that if people do not make plans for their future, they will run into a huge problem and overwhelmed by stress. In order to diminish stress people should make sure they have suitable plans for their activities.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that making careful plan not only can predict future activities but also can provide an opportunity for people to enhance their self-confidence. Broadly speaking, taking risks and conduct works through chance and luck represent that people suffer from paucity of confident and are not able to do their works by a sense of assured. To put it in other word, make a sound decision prior to doing a works not only can promote self-confidence and self- esteem but also can make people responsible. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, sometimes make a plan could not work effectively and people should take risks in order to do their best. Indeed, in some case, many opportunities happen by chance and make a sound decision will not work. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, carry out works through chances or plans have its own merits and demerits. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that not until people make a plan or make a sound decision before doing works, will not they gain a proper results. Additionally, make a careful decision will patronize people to improve their self- confidence and being self-sufficient person. I highly suggest that people in order to be successful, should being aware of unpredictable problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 450, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a work' or simply 'works'?
Suggestion: a work; works
...d, make a sound decision prior to doing a works not only can promote self-confidence an...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'as to', 'broadly speaking', 'in fact', 'as a matter of fact', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226643598616 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.176470588235 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0934256055363 0.0866891130778 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0743944636678 0.046263068375 161% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0432525951557 0.0685040099705 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115916955017 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0536332179931 0.0351676179071 153% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8259041553 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0311418685121 0.0309702414327 101% => OK
Particles: 0.00519031141869 0.00188951952338 275% => OK
Determiners: 0.0674740484429 0.0887237588012 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0311418685121 0.0209618222197 149% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00692041522491 0.0139019557991 50% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3241.0 2387.08602151 136% => OK
No of words: 527.0 408.028673835 129% => OK
Chars per words: 6.14990512334 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.370018975332 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254269449715 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170777988615 0.174417080927 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125237191651 0.112833075102 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8259041553 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 62.4671997436 59.2087087015 106% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 21.9583333333 20.5533526081 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2676928175 48.84282405 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.041666667 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9583333333 20.5533526081 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 47.3852783049 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.34705882353 1.45489161554 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358496907311 0.300154397459 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0902255587267 0.103427244359 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0450578290375 0.0752933317313 60% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.450693215163 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.10112941181 0.151897553556 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121789751671 0.114077575197 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101817186197 0.0781384742642 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.396252930272 0.336927656856 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0599776491814 0.067059652881 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250973415022 0.210909579961 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125850613586 0.0618886996521 203% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8870967742 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 18.0 8.42114695341 214% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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