Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
Educational institutions not only provide students with the knowledge but also help them to evolve critical personal and social skills. I think that students should be required to attend classes at University. There are a few reasons why I feel this way.
First of all, in a classroom professors keep students focused. It is no secret that young people struggle from being distracted when they study on their own. There is a myriad of electronic device that takes away the attention of the students from their studies when nobody controls them. For instance, when I was a college student I did not have access to the Internet, Facebook, and television in dorms. So, I could focus on the learning materials constantly. Conversely, nowadays, the millennials have their cell phones on hand all the time. Moreover, they have kind of addiction to the device. They look at their phones every minute with or without a reason, and, therefore, the modern students get distracted continuously. This way, the teacher can help them to overcome the problem by prohibiting to use the cell phones during the lesson. If the students stay focused on the lessons, they will learn more and enhance intellectually.
Secondly, in the classroom, the pupils can improve their communication skills. When the students have an option to study at home, they lack an opportunity to socialize. They may become introverted persons unable to communicate effectively, which may cause problems in the future, such as the inability to build the relationships with colleagues. It is important to keep in mind, that the modern business based on the teamwork, and having a capability of interacting with the teammates is pivotal to excel. For example, back in the pharmacy school, I was a full-time student. I was always actively participating in a variety of college group projects. It helped be to develop social skills and built confidence in communication with others. In fact, after the graduation, it has been very easy to me to socialize at the new workplaces and to make friends with the colleagues. Moreover, the hard work and the great relationships with the co-workers made me promoted by my employers. To that end, attending the classes provides students with the opportunity for social engagement and career growth.
Although the remote studying can have some benefits, such as saving time and money on commuting to the university, they can not overweight the advantages of the presence in the classroom.
To conclude, I strongly believe that attending the classes is incredibly beneficial for students, and, hence, should be required by universities. This is because it helps students to concentrate on the learning material and gain indispensable social skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, hence, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in fact, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2298.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15246636771 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96690574691 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54932735426 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1103424235 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3846153846 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202196094265 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546740200259 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754224685323 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128451451946 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784280359228 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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