Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork. Which of the two approaches do you prefer?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Faced with the fierce society, people have to compete for their careers. Actually, they are going to busying in improving themselves instead of companying family members. As a result, parents spend less time on play with their children, which separates their relations eventually. Therefore, in my view, the best choice for parents is to spare time to accomplish works with children.
To begin with, maintaining relations accelerates children's developments. It is obvious that parents have a significant impact on children due to this special relationship. What they do guides children to figure out the meaning of the action, and then try to imitate. Evidently, it gives a clear instrument of how to become a man like parents. On the other hand, studies show that the child that doesn't have opportunities of communication with parents takes a longer time to master new skills than who has more access.
In addition, Good traits from parents could be inherited by their children. As we know, parents are the earliest teacher of children's life. Some vital characteristics, such as humility, honesty, and loyalty, could be passed through the interactions with children. For example, my father is a typical farmer, who is satisfied with the current and always keeps silent when a bad thing happens to him instead of telling us. However, he treat his promise as a treasure and he doesn't break it so far. So, he influences me so much that I never say no if I promise to someone.
Even though there are a lot of important things from various perspectives of the adult, communication can't be neglected for parents. The pressure coming from lives is going to squashes their time silently and removes the relationship among family members slowly.
To sum up. parents should focus on the development of the next generation rather than themselves, and it can improve the way of communication as well.
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, in my view, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05732484076 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88527298444 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62101910828 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2019270939 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5789473684 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5263157895 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05263157895 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296732604203 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762353452408 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711085330108 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140322896365 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102513906081 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.