Nowadays, youngsters are constantly under too much pressure and they can hardly find some time to relax. Here is a claim that children should have fun playing games or sports when their parents do not have enough time to spend with them. While some people think that students are supposed to focus on student and use that time to study, I believe that students should use that time to relax. This is because after some relaxation, their study efficacy can be enhanced. Besides, there are other benefits playing games or sports.
To begin with, playing games or sports could help kids relieve the pressure from study. Sometimes students can feel overwhelmed due to the heavy burden exerted by teachers or parents. Therefore, some entertainments can greatly assuage their pressure. Besides, if they relax for a while and then go back to study, they can study even more efficiently. Hence, playing games or sports is definitely necessary for juveniles.
Secondly, games or sports could promote the friendship. In most cases, children will play games or sports with their friends since these games will become boring without the company of friends. So during the process of playing with their friends, their friendship will be improved invisibly. What I have experienced can fully illustrate this point. When I was in high school, I liked playing basketball very much and I played almost every weekend, which made me get acquainted with Tony. After playing basketball with him several weeks, I became his best friend. We shared our secrets and went out playing basketball whenever it's possible. It was because of our passion for basketball that we become best friends.
Last but not least, playing games can improve one's intelligence and playing sports can improve our cooperation skills. For instance, when you are playing the computer game called Angry Birds, you have to formulate a plan according to the layout of the birds. You may also adopt different strategies when encountering different number of birds. So this is how you get your intelligence developed when playing computer games. As for sports, cooperation can be significant. Like when you are playing basketball, you must find the right time to pass the ball since it is not your own game, you have to collaborate with others in order to win. Therefore, playing games and sports are conducive to us.
In conclusion, children do need some relaxation in view of the burden they are under. Also, since playing games and sports has some appealing advantages, we ought to play them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in most cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2130.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04739336493 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55181474563 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526066350711 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2730548382 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8888888889 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6296296296 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 11.8709677419 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33495807802 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857914193453 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836876351621 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190659202129 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133171953046 0.0645574589148 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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