Some people believe that the world is being harmed by human activities, others feel that human activities make the world a better place, which view do you agree with? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
Without a shadow of doubt, the Earth has been developing the changes which cause by humans over the last decades, whether in good way or bad way. In my opinion, I believe that humans are destroying the planet Earth. I feel this way for two specific reasons which I will thoroughly elaborate in the subsequent paragraphs.
What must be prioritized is human beings are key factors that cause global warming. Most of the human activities produced carbon dioxide which is a greenhouse gas. To be specific, the greenhouse gas is the culprit for increased average temperature of the Earth, making it's harder for us to live in these environments. For example, nowadays, due to the boost of the world's population, the cars' demand is getting higher every single year. These cars give out a great amount of carbon dioxide. There are studies showed that the carbon dioxide in the world has increased over 200% in just 5 years and these cars are to blame for.
What's equally worth discussing is that human activities are detrimental for others species such as plants, animals and insects. These species are important to the ecosystem. However, some animal species are endangered because people invade their natural habitats. For instance, deforestation, which human does to provide places for farmlands and residental areas, merely causes the extinction of the black-tailed deers. Cutting the woods and clearing the lands means eliminating the dwelling of these deers and reducing their population. According to the world wildlife animals organization, there are only 5 of them left in North Canada. And the humans are the ones to be condemned.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that Earth is being harmed by human activity. This is because the amount of the greenhouse gas human produced and the dangers human causes to other species.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...mple, nowadays, due to the boost of the worlds population, the cars demand is getting ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...ars and these cars are to blame for. Whats equally worth discussing is that human ...
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Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lands'' or 'land's'?
Suggestion: lands'; land's
...ers. Cutting the woods and clearing the lands means eliminating the dwelling of these...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06270627063 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69145910576 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57095709571 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2000740018 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2222222222 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270325971246 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846586213978 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574842966546 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16479805382 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256427053868 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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