Some people like to buy and eat their meals at restaurants frequently, while others like to do this at home. Which one do you prefer? Why?
Diet, compactly related to people’ s daily lives, has been increasingly significant in modern society. Some people are more likely to eat out while others prefer to eat at home. Personally, I believe that eating at home will be a better choice.
Apparently, a number of advantages can be discovered in the situation of eating at home. Primarily, homemade food is more healthy which may help me maintain a good health. When it comes to something homemade, the very first word that people commonly think of is ‘healthy’. Since ,usually, people will choose the best food they can find to feed their relatives, home is always the origin of healthy food supply. Then, undoubtedly we can always stay good health when eating at home. On top of that, people can use limited budget to gain relatively great food. Nowadays, cost spent on diets has been shown like an inclining line which may indicate that the prices of food in restaurants are increasing. In order to eat better meanwhile being limited to budget, eating at home will certainly be a unique choice. That is to say, we can spend less as well as eat better. Why not?
Admitted, benefits can also be found in the situation of eating at restaurant. Most importantly, there will be diverse kinds of food to choose when eating out. I am convinced that there are plenty of restaurants. Also, different restaurants always specialize in different kinds of food. Consequently, people are able to taste diverse food when they are eating out.
Generally speaking, although food in restaurants is of immense diversity, I still prefer to eat my mother’s cooking at home. Finally, I am pleasant to offer a piece of advice that people should base on their own hobbies and customs to make the suitable choice. Some of them who are more interested in enjoying diverse food are more likely to go eating in restaurant. While others who feel like having healthy and less expensive food may choose to eat at home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Line 7, column 466, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pensive food may choose to eat at home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, consequently, finally, first, if, may, so, still, then, well, while, as well as, on top of that, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89285714286 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78706214848 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9400914058 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2857142857 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294491130379 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100836518439 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977018519627 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218811341315 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895789194747 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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