Some people like to buy and eat their meals at restaurants frequently while others like to do this at home. Which do you prefer? Why?
Nowadays, people normally accept the truth that the food that it is cooked at home has high quality than at restaurant, although, some people has opposite opinion and consider other factors. In my opinion, the eating at home have a lot of beneficial rather than restaurants. That is due to the food at home are more healthier, moreover you do not need to spend more money, and it is more clearness.
First and foremost, without doubt, the food that it is served at home is more healthier than other places. Otherwise, at home one can choose the nutritional material for cooking. As all of us know, if the material the you choose were not healthy, it will become the cause of diseasis. For exmaple, my mother always try to cooking food with fresh material; thus, the probability of disease is lower than other status. Also, she usually spend a specific time for cleaning the material from bacteria. Consequently, the food that eat at home are more in control than restaurants. you can be sure about them.
Moreover, when you cook your demand at home, you do not need to expend high cost for eating. In other words, you can prepare law material with low cost. For instance, when I go to restaurants, I must pay an immense cost for kentucky of chiken, however, with the cost that I purchase for this food, I will be able to buy three unsophisticated chiken and cook them at home. Thus, the cooking at home is more economical rather than at restaurants.
Last but not least, I believe when you must eat your food at restaurant every day, you must spend an numerous volume of your time in the way of restaurant or time for preparing. To put it differently, there are three time that you must eating the meal and you need to prepare and go to the restaurants; therefore, a lot of your time waste during these back and forth between home and the restaurants. As an example, when I was students in another city, I were obligated to utilize from restaurants food. It was the cause that I had loose a lot of my time in the way of home and restaurants before I started to cooking at home by myself.
As outlined above, I think that having a lunch and dinner at home is more beneficial rather than at restaurants. that is because of the home meals are healthier, cheaper and save your time for doing other works.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
...ts. That is due to the food at home are more healthier, moreover you do not need to spend more...
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Line 2, column 74, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
..., the food that it is served at home is more healthier than other places. Otherwise, at home o...
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Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'you'?
Suggestion: the; you
...ing. As all of us know, if the material the you choose were not healthy, it will become...
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Line 2, column 435, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...er than other status. Also, she usually spend a specific time for cleaning the materi...
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Line 2, column 576, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...e are more in control than restaurants. you can be sure about them. Moreover, when...
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Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...at restaurant every day, you must spend an numerous volume of your time in the way...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[1]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'having lunch'.
Suggestion: having lunch
...self. As outlined above, I think that having a lunch and dinner at home is more beneficial r...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
... beneficial rather than at restaurants. that is because of the home meals are health...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51913875598 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56610703916 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456937799043 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8156225978 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.45 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289392174881 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10606307336 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577480917274 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194761503254 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438410496117 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.