Some people like to buy and eat their meals at restaurants frequently while others like to do this at home. Which do you prefer? Why?
I prefer to eat my meals at home because I would have the opportunity to spend more time with my family. Moreover, I believe it is much healthier than restaurant foods. I will illustrate my reasons in the following paragraphs.
First, my eating meals at home you can spend more time with your family. As a result, it could help to make relationships stronger. Indeed, today, people are very busy because people are struggling with making money. Thus, they have little time to be with their families. If people don’t try to allocate more time to their family, their relationships would become destroyed little by little. Therefore, eating at home is one of the best chances to spend more time with them. For example, I have a friend who loved his family very much. Last year, He got fired from his earlier job and started a new job himself. He worked until midnight to become successful and make more money. Therefore, he doesn’t see his wife and children except when they were at sleep. Although they all knew that he has no choice except to work until lates at nights to make more money, they got away gradually unknowingly. Even though, they didn’t have time to talk together about their daily issues or to make love. Thereby, as a result, their relationship became cold as far as someday his wife asked him to divorce.
Second, restaurant foods aren’t healthy at all. Although all restaurants must have some health certificates, you cannot be sure that what happens in their kitchen. On the contrary, when you are cooking at home you decide about the quality of raw materials and the way you want to cook them. Moreover, today, people mostly eat junk food at restaurants which is not healthy at all. Junk foods have a lot of fat, sugar, salt and other things that will gradually affect people’s health. For example, when I was a student at university, I used to eat at restaurants. I mostly chose fast food because I’m a fan of pizza and hotdog. Although it was very delicious, after a year I added a weight of about 9 kg. Moreover, when someday I became sick and my friends took me to the hospital. The Doctor said to me I got hypertension which was probably because of consuming a lot of salt and oil. Thereby, he seriously emphasized to me to avoid restaurant foods. Hence, meals that are cooked at home are healthier than restaurant food.
Based on the aforementioned reasons, it can be concluded that eating meals at home instead of restaurants would be a better choice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 588, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...d to eat at restaurants. I mostly chose fast food because I'm a fan of pizza an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72892938497 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66705147847 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50569476082 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2167187068 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.5862068966 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1379310345 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.37931034483 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255516949071 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703471700472 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701076603039 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164495143931 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490251151063 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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