Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer totry new things and take risks. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice
Today's way of life is very easy, a lot of advancements in technology that made our life very comfortable. We barely have to do any physical activity to do something. We are enjoying all these things but at what cost? all overuse of technology and easy life will surely lead to a negative impact on our future generation, including ourself also.
Whenever I think of future generations, the immediate thought which runs in my mind is about the exploitation of non-renewable natural resources. Once was a time when we had an abundant amount of supply of every resource but as the world grow, the population increased, consumer count, increases these all things cost limitations on these resources. Earlier we heard that there were very less vehicles, only a few people had. Nowadays every family, in fact, every family member has a vehicle for their personal use. No one prefers to use public transport. Even for a small distance, people like to use a vehicle. So this was beneficial use when things were under control, now the situation is different, the use of facilities are more for comfort rather than a requirement. Consequences of such habits already started, the price of petrol is increasing drastically. If this would continue in the upcoming years there will be a time when only a few people can use a vehicle, like in old times. This will lead the future generation won't be able to enjoy the facilities of a personal vehicle.
Another the most noticeable habit of this generation is food habits. we are so much into eating junk s that sometimes we forget this can cause health problems. Eating from restaurants has become a pattern nowadays. Earlier people used to do like they went to a restaurant once a week, or monthly or any occasion but nowadays this is the part of every day. People crave junk so much that they accepted this as a meal of the day. If we continue to follow this pattern then this will severely cause health issues and majorly obesity. Obesity itself is not that problematic but there are several other diseases that result from this like metabolic problems, heart problems, and joint compression due to excess weight-bearing on joints. Also if our younger one sees this pattern as the default they consider this as a general way of eating lifestyle and they will adopt this and cause to affect their health too. Nowadays we see that it is not just members of the family who is obese but the overall family is obese because either of their diet intake or their past trait which is responsible for slow metabolism. So days are not far where obesity becomes a serious issue
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One thing which I believe cause the most negative impact on future generations is deforestation. Other things I feel we can compromise or we can find some other alternatives but what about the forest, it is not possible to grow a forest in months or days, it takes years. People seriously cut the whole forest to build a factory or to build apartments to gain personal benefit. Sometimes I don't understand what they will do with all the wealth when they don't get a suitable environment to live in when they don't get proper food to it. It is known by everyone that to maintain the season, proper rain, prevent global warming, plants are very essential, in fact, its a key to a savior of weather. When people exploit it then future generations will be the one who has to suffer problem, suffer all the weather disturbance
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In nutshell, I include our today's lifestyle is neither environmentally friendly nor body-friendly and we genuinely need to change these habits to give a better life to future generations, not just only technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: All
...ying all these things but at what cost? all overuse of technology and easy life wil...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ur future generation, including ourself also. Whenever I think of future generati...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun vehicles is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
.... Earlier we heard that there were very less vehicles, only a few people had. Nowada...
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...abit of this generation is food habits. we are so much into eating junk s that som...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...due to excess weight-bearing on joints. Also if our younger one sees this pattern as...
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Message: Did you mean 'affecting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: affecting
...tyle and they will adopt this and cause to affect their health too. Nowadays we see that ...
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Suggestion: don't
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
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...ng, plants are very essential, in fact, its a key to a savior of weather. When peop...
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...lem, suffer all the weather disturbance . In nutshell, I include our todays life...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, as to, i feel, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3032.0 1977.66487455 153% => OK
No of words: 634.0 407.700716846 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78233438486 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01790360848 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70315899449 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 312.0 212.727598566 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492113564669 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 982.8 618.680645161 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3099239667 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8064516129 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4516129032 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8064516129 5.45110844103 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187711052982 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486353960837 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517448276306 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939458888068 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467651592677 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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