Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your
grandparents were children.
Every time has its own advantages and disadvantages. There were things in old time that we don't get now and there are benefits of today's life which elder people did not get. When we talk about easy and comfortable we can surely say that today's life got this advantage of easy and comfortable life as compared to our grandparents child.
To begin with I believe that yes today's life is far more better comfortable and luxurious than older time and for that the technology is key factor. All the comfort we are enjoying today because of advancement in technology and development. There has been a lot of changes in the ways we live, ways we spend money, ways we see life ahead from that of past. Our grandparents would never thought of this much easiness could happen to this world. Lets take an example, we all hear from our grandparents that we used to travel a very long distance by bare foot just to attend a lecture and that is true though, that time they had no facilities to travel whereas now a days vehicle come at the door to pick the child and drop. So is really a different experience for our grandparents that how world has changed a lot in this much of time. Even people now travel very long distance by their own vehicle because of a proper road construction. There are other things like now days we can do most of our work while staying at home like paying phone bills, we can do shopping , book tickets and study . So this is a huge list and when our grandparents experience such things they really feel difficult to digest. So this is one way where we are enjoying things in a better way.
To carry on further we always prioritize our health . So, we can lucidly see the advancement in our health science, treatment of many disease . Earlier people really has to pay a lot when they get ill but now days so is not true we can get treatment in very nearby area. Being girl one problem of past I can truely feel is that women earlier don't have sanitary pads, there was availability in market but people were not aware that much and I heard stories were people lost their life so early because of infection. When we look of same problem now every one is aware of this mensuration and really good improvement in female health. To add on further health one mind blowing example we all faced in covid time , Its not true that people had not died but I studied about this that there were pandemics earlier time where world suffer for 5 years but now we can see how meticulously world handled this situation. So health advantage is very precious for elder one because they saw loosing their loved one because of minor ailment.
To sum up I strongly believe that we are enjoying and having comfortable life in many perspectives from minor requirement to major one.
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| 2023-07-18 | M. MEHRABI KERMANI | 60 | view |
| 2023-06-04 | nph | 70 | view |
| 2023-04-17 | sadasr | 73 | view |
| 2023-04-05 | Dat_Nguyen | 70 | view |
| 2023-01-20 | theprasad | 71 | view |
- Some people like to do only what they already do well Other people prefer totry new things and take risks Which do you prefer Use specific reasons andexamples to support your choice 70
- people spend time on things which they should not 73
- now relation re not beneficial as they were 70
- People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do 70
- 20 year care use 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
.... There were things in old time that we dont get now and there are benefits of today...
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Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
... and comfortable we can surely say that todays life got this advantage of easy and com...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...h I believe that yes todays life is far more better comfortable and luxurious than older ti...
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Line 3, column 445, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ch easiness could happen to this world. Lets take an example, we all hear from our g...
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Line 3, column 659, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...hey had no facilities to travel whereas now a days vehicle come at the door to pick the ch...
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Line 3, column 665, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...d no facilities to travel whereas now a days vehicle come at the door to pick the ch...
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Line 3, column 1066, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e paying phone bills, we can do shopping , book tickets and study . So this is a h...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...can do shopping , book tickets and study . So this is a huge list and when our gra...
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Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... further we always prioritize our health . So, we can lucidly see the advancement ...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disease seems to be countable; consider using: 'many diseases'.
Suggestion: many diseases
...ent in our health science, treatment of many disease . Earlier people really has to pay a lo...
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ealth science, treatment of many disease . Earlier people really has to pay a lot ...
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Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...I can truely feel is that women earlier dont have sanitary pads, there was availabil...
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Line 5, column 587, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w every one is aware of this mensuration and really good improvement in female he...
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Line 5, column 711, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...owing example we all faced in covid time , Its not true that people had not died b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, whereas, while, as to, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2270.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 506.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48616600791 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44564377597 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4604743083 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 713.7 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3965084203 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.095238095 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0952380952 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52380952381 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127762218797 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463190947901 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537007907679 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962957317585 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458429301505 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.