When it comes to the issue of the best place for habitation, some people prefer a small city and others prefer to live in a big city. As far as I am concerned, we should consider this controversial decision from several points of view including job opportunities, facilities, and even economical subject.
I am inclined to believe that, living in a metropolitan city opens doors to a wide range of opportunities. For instance, when I graduated from an unknown university in the chemistry of engineering, I came back to my homeland, which is a small city in the north of Iran. Although I was attempting to find a career, I did not succeed. In fact, in a small town, you are not capable of finding an occupation let alone a job that is related to your expertise. However, the situation was changed when I decided to migrate to Tehran, which is the capital of Iran.
Another advantage of living in a big city is that you will be able to save more money. With spread public transportation system like the subway, having a private car would not be your priority. So, you will be able to allocate more money for necessary things unless buying a car.
Finally, if you would like to have an exciting life, without a doubt you should select a big city. There are a lot of recreations like movie theaters, restaurants, night clubs, playgrounds, etc. So, if you have a boring day, going to a night club makes you full of energy. Also, meeting friends in your home will be tedious you could invite them to go to a Chinese restaurant for drinking, eating, and speaking about daily subjects.
In conclusion, the advantages of living in a big city are more than that of a small city. You have access to numerous job opportunities, affordable facilities, and plenty of recreation if you inhabit in a big city. Although a big city may have some troubles, it would be logical to ignore them because of a hug of good points.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, speaking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59183673469 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81967760842 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539358600583 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7595903532 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6470588235 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208217632846 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701239409072 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112895653516 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125308996408 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932046246173 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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