When it comes to the question about human's effect on nature, most people more focus on its destructive influences on the environment. Here I want to look at this issue from several points of view including deforestation, global warming, and air pollution.
As far as I am concerned, humans always tend to find new methods for decreasing the cost of exploitation of natural resources. In this way, they were coerced to ignore some of the implications of their activities. For instance, they have destroyed a great part of Amazon for manufacturing paper, making habitations or land for agriculture. As we all know, soil erosion, dust storm, and flood are a few horrible implications of deforestation. They could prevent these catastrophes by planting new trees or other scientific methods for preserving the soil. However, the cost is an important factor in industrial activities and preserving nature is expensive.
I am inclined to believe that, cars are the most pollution making things in the history of mankind. Cars emission is one of the great sources of Carbon Dioxide which is a famous greenhouse gas into the atmosphere. These kinds of gas trap the heat of Earth and increase its temperature, which is called Global Warming. This phenomenon will put life on Earth in danger if we do not find a way to diminish greenhouse gases.
In conclusion, the industrial revolution and human activities had disrupted the balance of life by deforestation and global warming. Although it seems that the earth will be a dry planet, I hope that the next generation being more responsible for preserving nature.
- Many people believe that it is important to protect the environment, but they make no effort to protect it themselves.Why do you think it is the case?What actions do you think that individuals can do to protect the environment? 3
- Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place wouldyou prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The most important way to improve people’s health is to clean the environment 3
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? 40
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...n this way, they were coerced to ignore some of the implications of their activities. For i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 265.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08301886792 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04037152739 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62641509434 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 14.4737623277 48.9658058833 30% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.2142857143 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.054931109522 0.236089414692 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0189503683652 0.076458572812 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269173125787 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0309061803962 0.150856017488 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206897068873 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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