Some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. Others choose to spend time with a large no of friends. Compare the advantages of each choice. which of these two ways of spending time do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer.
There are two types of people, one who spends time with a group whereas one who spends time with one or two friends. Obviously, both the choices have their advantages. But considering some specific points I would prefer spending time with one or two close friends.
Spending time with a group will surely be more exciting and fun. We can party all the time we meet. Anything, when done in a group is more exciting. For example, if we consider a college student, he will definitely have more fun when he spent time with a number of friends. A student with more friends is even considered "popular" in college. But it has its drawbacks you cannot share personal matters. Spending time in a group can only provide fun, creative thinking and productive discussion is not possible when we spend time in a group.
On the other hand spending time with one or two close friends can be very effective in personal development. Sharing personal matters, emotions, seeking advice etc. in spending time with close friends can really help out one from numerous stress and pain permanently. Such discussions can also turn out to be productive sometimes. For example, an excellent business idea may arise, an innovative research topic, answer to some question etc. It can be signified as proper utilisation of time. After all, time is money.
I would prefer spending time with one or two close friends because I am a grown up now and I know the importance of shaping my future. My spending time with a group is over. Yes, such partying with friends are real stress reliever but cannot be compared to opening up your emotion to someone you trust and you can also expect support and advice from your friend most of the time. For example, I faced a situation where I was unable to complete my project on time, and I was about to lose a semester but when I told my friend about it, she helped me out she supported me on my every step, I finished my project and that was the time when I realised the importance of true friend.
Therefore I prefer to spend my leisure time with my one or two close friends. It helps me get relaxed, it helps me look ahead with confidence whatever the situation may be and it helps me to be myself because I know I have someone close enough to buttress my motives and to get advice from without any selfish feeling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ised the importance of true friend. Therefore I prefer to spend my leisure time with ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'after all', 'for example', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226495726496 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.143162393162 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0705128205128 0.0866891130778 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.042735042735 0.046263068375 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.104700854701 0.0685040099705 153% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0961538461538 0.118717715034 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0235042735043 0.0351676179071 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57069268425 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0213675213675 0.0309702414327 69% => OK
Particles: 0.00641025641026 0.00188951952338 339% => OK
Determiners: 0.0598290598291 0.0887237588012 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0320512820513 0.0209618222197 153% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0192307692308 0.0139019557991 138% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2347.0 2387.08602151 98% => OK
No of words: 419.0 408.028673835 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60143198091 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.307875894988 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.238663484487 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169451073986 0.174417080927 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0692124105012 0.112833075102 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57069268425 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474940334129 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.9230302165 59.2087087015 88% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2173913043 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7948358372 48.84282405 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.043478261 120.699889404 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2173913043 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.521739130435 0.644075263715 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 42.083739753 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.19117647059 1.45489161554 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436068462448 0.300154397459 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0730062816892 0.103427244359 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0715700105349 0.0752933317313 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.461374534129 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.187377847971 0.151897553556 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143573267088 0.114077575197 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109902888566 0.0781384742642 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.279131979183 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.070910961871 0.067059652881 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279086883663 0.210909579961 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838783813696 0.0618886996521 136% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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