There are various types of occupations and companies around the world, some are better to function with a team, while others are better as an individual employee. Were I given a choice, I prefer to be self-employed or a freelancer.
For one thing, a freelancer can have a flexible and favorable working schedule. Instead of working seven days a week or eight hours a day, a freelancer can exert his or her time willingly. In this way, without bothering absences for important meetings or not being permitted to ask for leaves, freelancers are able to arrange their time for traveling abroad or relaxing when life is too stressful. Besides, freelancers can be more productive and motivated after resting appropriately.
For another thing, being self-employed or freelance enable people to develop themselves. Apart from saving time for relaxing, freelancers can acquire knowledge or professional skills by taking curriculums in community colleges or adult cram schools at free time. Take my friend, Amy, for example, she’s not only a blog-writer but also a photographer, and now learning French as second foreign language. Owning to diverse capabilities, businesses always come to Amy. Thus, it is beneficial to possess more than one professional skill in this competitive society.
Last but not least, freelancers can choose whoever to work with rather than being forced to face same people every day. On the contrary, working at a big company make people have no choice but to deal with complicated interpersonal relationships. When it comes to intricate social networks, it is usually associated with countless troubles and inconvenience, which make working less efficient. However, if cooperating with people by cases, people are likely to treat each other as customers and tend to be more respectful as well as polite.
Undoubtedly, though people can also benefit from learning others’ working methods in a company, it is better to avoid too many unnecessary interpersonal hassles and have more individual spaces and time. Hence, as far as I’m concerned, I aspire to be a writer and prefer to be a freelancer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, second, so, thus, well, while, another thing, apart from, for example, as well as, for another thing, for one thing, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28445747801 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10552338665 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609970674487 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1374857356 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1176470588 5.45110844103 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271846527784 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829300523927 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042547297645 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13677291576 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232937546117 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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