Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Other think access to much information creates problem. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer.
In the last decades, a large number of internet providers give more access to a lot of people with vital information. From an economic and educational aspect, this fact has a lot of benefits for all people. this essay intends to examine these two factors for the people.
In the first step, the economic situation can be grown by sharing information between the company and big organizations. The way of explanation, merchants, investors, and officials in the companies need updated information to consist of the huge amount of money for running the economic projects which are suitable for people especially jobless and freelancer people. However, it should be considered that the type of information is more important than other factors that depend on the information. In total, from my point of view, sharing information from the financial perspective is necessitated for all communities.
Additionally, academic societies can be counted as an essential unit of every country. Generally, in the graduates or postgraduates, the demands for exchanging information between universities impose the countries to adopt a strong rule to access simply on library and digital media. In the USA, for instance, 99% of universities published their publication, book, paper, and journal on electronic platforms. It can help to increase the rate of transferring information between societies. In my idea, digital media can play important role in the scientific community.
In conclusion, an explosion of information in the current century is a trend for internet provider companies which is an essential organization to share information for all people. in my idea, consideration of two aspects as educational and economical vision can move toward our position to the ideal future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 277.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41877256318 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19941151127 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563176895307 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2144412189 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.214285714 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163751827229 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560686335029 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060739706475 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103925977168 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033614039485 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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