Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with ?
technology is the most if not the most important part of humans lives. considering advantages an disadvantages of technology, some people believe that it cuase some problems whereas others, involve me, think it has great information for humans. I explain my opinion inthe following paragraphs.
to begin with, internet is a widespread network that make people knowledgable. nternet is one of the great evelution in world. when you use the internet you can search any thing that across your mind and then you will see a veriety of information about it. such as, culture, litreture, education, and so on. moreover you can know all events that happened around the world. people needless to spend a lot of time and cost access on these sources. furthermore individuals can use internet any time and any where that they want. so help them to get knowledge with valuable information.
to add, the internet is always up to date. according to invent internet, pawerful companies reveald that use of internet became easier. for exampl, google. the information become update evrey day and it give people this opportunity to have rekiable and new inforemation. in fact internet make living easier than before. fore instnce, imagin when you want to travel to other contry, you can reserve tiket to fly and a room in hottle just by a site and its more easier than worry about whether you can find a tiket or hottle or not.
to conclude, although using internet in a wrong way probably make problems, the benefits that you can have from these valuable information are more than that. so according those reasons that i mentiond, i think the internet is the best information resorce for humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, whereas, i think, in fact, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92957746479 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68356988209 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609154929577 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8462452873 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6842105263 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9473684211 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292782195387 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738879506817 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651001989623 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166503892455 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339926059021 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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