Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information Others think access to much information creates problems Which view do you agree with Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Opinions diverge on whether internet can supply people with information that creates good impacts or bad consequences. Although some fervently advocate that accessing to tones of information will cause problems, I am at loggerheads with this idea due to some rational reasons.
Admittedly, when people access to the internet, they can use it as a tool to approach thousands of documents. The documents can be any topic that can help people in studying or doing research. From this, people can gain knowledge easily which helps them a lot in their education or careers. Importantly, most of the documents online are free so it can be considered as valuable information for people to obtain. For example, multiple students in my school use the internet to help them gain information to finish their researches. They can access to a variety of reliable websites such as BBC or CNN. These websites will supply students with authentic information that students just need to reference these sites after using the information. Besides that, office people can use the internet to go to youtube to help them how to use office applications. Now that, many businesses will only employ candidates if they know how to use these office programs so thanks to the internet, these candidates can learn how to use them easily.
Secondly, people can access news information in the fastest way with the internet. The news will be updated frequently so that people can know and be up to date. People will be reported by the news on any topic such as weather, rules of the government or even international trade and fighting. For example, my city just endured a storm last week, before the storm entered Danang, the place where i live, I had been noticed by the news on the internet, and plenty of news articles written and warned people about how strong the storm was and how people could people prevent it. That is an exemplary example to show how helpful the internet is to people.
All things considered, I find accessing the internet can help me gain significant value information which helps me in my study and daily life. I highly recommend people use the internet in order to have a convenient life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 932, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this office' or 'these offices'?
Suggestion: this office; these offices
...ploy candidates if they know how to use these office programs so thanks to the internet, the...
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Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e storm entered Danang, the place where i live, I had been noticed by the news on...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86863270777 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69489144381 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504021447721 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2530941561 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.888888889 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38888888889 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283521629889 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107532533059 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601444942175 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191869141049 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399640229555 0.0645574589148 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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