Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Internet have become the sixth sense of the people in twenty-first century; we are completely rein in by internet. Some people may think that internet provides legion amount of valuable information while others may believe that such humongous accessibility to information will create problems. In my personal opinion, I believe that such accessibility to huge amount of information are valuable. I feel this way mainly for three reasons which I will examine in this essay.
First of all, Information of the internet are boon for the student and their academics. Many students are not able to understand everything in the classroom. In internet each and every topic are presented on different way which makes the student comprehend the topic more clearly. Obviously, If there would not be acessibility to such information in the internet, it would have become difficult for the student to understand the topic which they could not do it in classroom. Consequetly, Information available at internet have become a additional options for the student to improve their academics. This can be exemplified through my example. When I used to study and sixth standard, i was not accessible to internet: so, when i used to have confusion at classroom, I used to read entire book on the topic which was very much time taking and used to table my other works. Nevertheless, When i reached to eighth standard , Than internet was there in the world and after that I used to solve the problems of the classroom within few hours.
Secondly, Information available on internet and accessibility to such information had make people to be upto date with the whole world. Like today people of eastern world can have the information of news, accidents, innovation etc of the western world with in few seconds. Had there would not be internet, it would not have become possible for we human to reach to such information. For example: Last month there was a war occured between Russia and Ukraine, which was a devastating one. And I living on the eastern world was easily getting the information of every second through different internet sources. Further, Internet was the thing that made me aware during covid times. It was the internet which helped me to know the ways to be save from precarious covid. If there would not be internet we will be unknown to the entire world event which is not good.
Finally, Information available on the internet helps to increase the curiosity among the students. Furthermore, Such escalating curiosity improves the research habbit among the students. Evidently, If there would not be internet accessing to different research project of the world would be impossible for the student. For instance: During my under graduate research time, It was the internet which increased my curiosity on Negligent crop and Through information of internet I did the field research on the same crop.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that information available on internet are valuable, as it promotes the curiosity exixting among people, helps to get the context of the entire world and assist students to improve in academics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2622.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 518.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06177606178 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82598864336 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436293436293 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 830.7 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6259190145 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.88 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.72 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256646114841 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07806570232 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703054979521 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149652220016 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738114978465 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.