Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The internet is one of the greatest inventions in the world with both negative and positive aspects in our lifestyle. But it is my firm belief that the internet represents a huge amount of valuable information especially for children with numerical questions. For a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
My primary reason is that I think access to extremely information make the people more researcher for achieving to their golds. I mean with huge amount of data there be more cognitive for distinguishing between true and fake articles. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. You see, I'm a girl with meticulous vision in my life because of my researcher mood. I gain this ability by access to a lot of information in the internet. As a result, this context helps me to have an exact view for finding true information and consequently be so successful in my education and my job.
Secondly, the internet provides children with a lot of valuable information.
most kids have immense questions and the internet supports them for finding and answering their questions. Moreover, parents are more free and easy with this new invention and if they don' t have enough information or strong answer to kid' s question, they just google and bingo, the answer prepared.
In light of the above mentioned, I strongly believe that accessibility to set of information is a great chance for improvement and growth of personality in our life. The internet not only makes us responsible but also helps us to widen our knowledge domain as a parent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, i mean, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 279.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89247311828 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9482155054 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5770609319 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9678719753 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244631580451 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917567549394 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696980818962 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142407924356 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539685780711 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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