Internet invention has changed our entire world because it helps to make the whole world as a small village. But recently people raised a problem of the reliability of the internet information so some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information, while others think access to much information creates problems. In my opinion, I think that internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, accessing to the internet helped people increase their knowledge. People can access to any overseas information easily from their homes. For instance, when I was student at pharmacy school, Tanta, Egypt, I was using the internet in my studying of Pharmaceutics subject because of the poor quality of my university. My university was lacking of the facilities and the curriculum was depending on memorization only so I turned to watch YouTube videos to visualize the whole processes from overseas universities. Using the internet helped me to simplify my studying and therefore I got high score. That's why, the internet can help people to widen their knowledge without having to take courses or traveling abroad.
Secondly, accessing to too much information is important for the transparency. people who are getting accessed to one side of news are supposedly to get brainwashed. For instance, before the using the internet, I was watching the Egyptian TV. I was missing many details about the sixth of October victory that the Egyptian military won the Israel military and that was the whole story I gained, but after I searched on the internet about this war, I found out that the negotiation between the two countries was the cause of the victory. Although there are possibility that the first cause is right but I like to be open minded and judge the truth by myself after knowing the information from its two sided.
To sum up, I believe that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information for two reasons. many countries are lacking of technology so the internet will be a good source for people especially the students to gain knowledge, and exposing to too much information will boost the mind to pick up the accurate information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, i think, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96614583333 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80627083132 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510416666667 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8335224508 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.176470588 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5882352941 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330470801635 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122564602237 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145199292575 0.0737576698707 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224999349885 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148005048815 0.0645574589148 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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