Some people say that technology has made life easier and more convenient. Others say that technology has made life more complex and dangerous. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As technology constantly progresses, numerous advanced high-tech devices are invented to improve human's life. Some people assert that technology makes life more convenient, while others believe that it has impacted our lives negatively. From my point of view, I am in favor of the notion that technology has substantially improved our lives in various aspects.
First, with the invention of sonar devices, mankind is able to sharpen medical treatments so as to take preventative measure towards some illnesses. For instance, doctors can utilize ultrasound to detect tumors inside human bodies and check out whether cancer is present or not. In this way, people can take actions against cancer in advance and save many lives. Furthermore, some sonar techniques are applied to pregnancy. Doctors can monitor the fetuses and enable mothers to know the health condition of their babies.
Second, high-tech products also facilitate formal education in various types of subject. Teachers exert multimedia devices to assist students to understand some difficult concepts of subjects. I remembered our geography teacher showed the class a video regarding how glaciers created the canyons in high latitudes. With the visualized model, we caught the concept pretty well. In addition to schooling, students can gain more knowledge out of class with many audio-visual equipment as well as application software.
Last but not least, the emergence of globalization is due to the invention of the Internet. Many multinational companies rely deeply on the online meetings to communicate with different executives abroad. Apart from saving time, technology enables enterprises to deal with emergency immediately, which declining the inconvenience resulted by distance and time. With these online devices, companies can operate more efficiently and less costly.
Admittedly, some people take the advantages of technology to commit crimes and cause the society more complex and dangerous. Nevertheless, I believe there are more merits people can acquire from technology as most people utilize it appropriately.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...d is able to sharpen medical treatments so as to take preventative measure towards some ...
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Line 5, column 455, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[4]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun equipment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much audio-visual equipment', 'a good deal of audio-visual equipment'.
Suggestion: much audio-visual equipment; a good deal of audio-visual equipment
...n gain more knowledge out of class with many audio-visual equipment as well as application software. Las...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, well, while, apart from, as to, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68571428571 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93070383071 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0644842788 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.2631578947 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5789473684 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42105263158 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180224696992 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053777434445 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758565194381 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111225891743 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954977275289 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 10.9000537634 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.01818996416 132% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.