Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Other moves a number of times throughout their lives. Which do you prefer?
In today's hectic world, in which life has trials and tribulations all people around the globe looking for better life. People have different point of view about lifestyle regarding the trends of modern world. By and large it's established beyond doubt that vast majorities of people bend over backwards to enjoy their life. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that they should spend their whole time living in one place whereas others hold exactly the opposite perspective. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, to the extent my personal perspective is concerned, live in different place will provide fertile ground for people to experience life vastly. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that it goes without saying that people in all around the world confront various obstacles in their life. In order to overcome those difficulties people need some changes in their life. Scientifically speaking, vast majorities of people use different strategies to lead a better lifestyle, which will render their life more convenient. The most paramount one can be moving to different place and look forward into better chances. Indeed, not only can different places provide an opportunity for people to find a decent job but also provide people with a happy life. Delving further into the issue reveal that experience different places will provide fertile ground for myriads of people to explore life and benefits from kind of chances, which that movement bring. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent research conducted in our country; show that crowds of people who move a number of time have been more successful in their life especially in their professional career rather than one's who just stay in one place.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that people will get acquaintance with different kind of culture and civilization. Broadly speaking, there are vast majorities of mystery behind every culture. In fact, not only will people provide with different tradition and customs of those cultures but also will enhance their knowledge about history of heritage. To put it in other word, people in different age will be able to take advantages of those heritage and get familiar with those tradition provide an opportunity for people to adapt themselves with community. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, live in one place will definitely come with lower stress. Indeed, myriads of people like to keep in touch with their family and old friends and moving to new area will make them feel anxiety and disturb. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, live in one place or move to a new area will certainly have its own merits and demerits. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realize that move a number of time will provide number of chances for people such as job opportunity in order to feel comfort. In addition, people will get familiar with different culture and civilization and are able to improve their social activities. I highly suggest that people should at least experience one time different kind of lifestyle in their entire lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this heritage' or 'those heritages'?
Suggestion: this heritage; those heritages
... age will be able to take advantages of those heritage and get familiar with those tradition p...
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Message: Did you mean 'this tradition' or 'those traditions'?
Suggestion: this tradition; those traditions
...of those heritage and get familiar with those tradition provide an opportunity for people to ad...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ind of lifestyle in their entire lives.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'regarding', 'so', 'whereas', 'at least', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'such as', 'by and large']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255033557047 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.147651006711 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0889261744966 0.0866891130778 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0620805369128 0.046263068375 134% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0436241610738 0.0685040099705 64% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139261744966 0.118717715034 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0352348993289 0.0351676179071 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70751777822 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0352348993289 0.0309702414327 114% => OK
Particles: 0.00167785234899 0.00188951952338 89% => OK
Determiners: 0.0604026845638 0.0887237588012 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0302013422819 0.0209618222197 144% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0134228187919 0.0139019557991 97% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3395.0 2387.08602151 142% => OK
No of words: 549.0 408.028673835 135% => OK
Chars per words: 6.1839708561 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84053189512 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.395264116576 0.338922669872 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269581056466 0.251872472559 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185792349727 0.174417080927 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138433515483 0.112833075102 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70751777822 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497267759563 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 60.0564572181 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.96 20.5533526081 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7204731839 48.84282405 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.8 120.699889404 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.96 20.5533526081 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.64 0.644075263715 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 48.9181056466 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.69536423841 1.45489161554 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261921029309 0.300154397459 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.092508858137 0.103427244359 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.057042196948 0.0752933317313 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.452029300238 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123879030377 0.151897553556 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972780614589 0.114077575197 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066895320881 0.0781384742642 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.521669283348 0.336927656856 155% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0430698546704 0.067059652881 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199803564828 0.210909579961 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457543763991 0.0618886996521 74% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 16.0 8.42114695341 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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