Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The earth has been existing as the only home which provides every alive organism with requirement for survival. As the human population increase, nutritional demand is increasing to sustain normal life of them day by day. Consequently, diverse marine and land animal existence is getting harassed by industrialization, housing and farmland.
First and foremost, all the industrialization processes, cultivation of crops and housing are decreasing extent of territory where the endangered species habit. As a result, some species of animals are in danger of extinction which causes severe drawbacks in further. For instance, decreases in number of fox initiate increases in rat population that draws crop loss after.
Secondly, destruction of every species make ecosystem impartiality which affect negatively on both animals and mankind well-being. Moreover, plants and microorganisms that play crucial role in ecosystem would lose control to maintain supportable live on the earth. As a consequences, climate change, global warming, and green-house effect develops expeditiously until earth turn into another mars in a solar system.
In conclusion, even though supplying human need is desperate issue keeping conventional state of ecosystem is much more important concern to keep continue living on the earth. By balancing both industrial development and providing threatened animals with their habitat consequences of ecosystem failure and weather changing problems can get solved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a consequence' or simply 'consequences'?
Suggestion: a consequence; consequences
...ntain supportable live on the earth. As a consequences, climate change, global warming, and gr...
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Line 4, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ial development and providing threatened animals with their habitat consequences ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 43.0788530466 9% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 217.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85714285714 4.8611393121 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18839397577 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.524837075471 136% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5566135446 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.545454545 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106755803273 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364072367291 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239518028025 0.0737576698707 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605614356221 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290887381234 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 10.9000537634 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.01818996416 135% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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