Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
With increasing population we human are finding more space for us in this world by cutting down trees and deforestation.We don't even care about the species who live in those forest specially the endangered ones. Some people things human needs for farmland, house and industry are more important than saving the life of the endangered animals. But as a nature lover i disagree to this statement.
First, endangered animal will suffer the most. There so many animals and birds which are already in endangered list and need specific enviornment to survive, but in the process of fulfilling human's needs these habitats are been destroyed. Eventually these animals will soon be extinct from the earth and in future we will have them in stories, just like how we have danesours. For example, endangered animals like Tiger whose total strength in the worls are less than 1000 soon will be extinct and our future generation would even have a chance to visualize this beast.
Second, Nature's food chain will get affected. Each and every animal has a specific roles in natures food chain cycle. With Extinction of every animal from earth, nature's food chain comes gets affected and that will have adverse affect on the nature. For Examples if a
Third, not saving land for the endangered animal indirectly means are cutting down trees and increasing deforestation in the world. This deforestation leads to increasing population in the world leading to global warming, climate changes, increase in the occurence of natural calamity life flood and dought in the world.
In conclusion i would like to state that, In order to save our planet earth we need to save animals, forests and not just humans. We should keep a check on the population instead of get more place of human in the worlds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, third, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97666666667 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53831746548 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6802093592 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.642857143 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226456361228 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876876040723 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104241295279 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129283672362 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100972402686 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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