Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
With an increasing population, we humans are finding more space for us in this world by cutting down trees and deforestation. We don't even care about the species who live in those forests especially the endangered ones. Some people things human needs for farmland, house, and industry are more important than saving the life of the endangered animals. But as a nature lover, I disagree with this statement.
First, the endangered animals will suffer the most. There so many animals and birds which are already in the endangered list and need a specific environment to survive, but in the process of fulfilling humans need these habitats are been destroyed. Eventually, these animals will soon be extinct from the earth and in future we will have them in stories, just like how we have dinosaurs. For example, endangered animals like Tiger whose total strength in the world is less than 1000 soon will be extinct and our future generation would even have a chance to visualize this beast.
Second, Nature's food chain will get affected. Each and every animal has a specific role in nature's food chain cycle. With the Extinction of every animal from the earth, nature's food chain comes gets affected and that will have an adverse effect on nature.
Third, not saving land for the endangered animal indirectly means are cutting down trees and increasing deforestation in the world. This deforestation leads to an increasing population in the world leading to global warming, climate changes, an increase in the occurrence of natural calamity like flood and drought in the world.
In conclusion, I would like to state that, In order to save our planet earth we need to save animals, forests and not just humans. We should keep a check on the population instead of getting more places of the human in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...utting down trees and deforestation. We dont even care about the species who live in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, third, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9477124183 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55029296166 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532679738562 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0249822936 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.933333333 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207053497089 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825865237046 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999696882368 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120869572123 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104751519952 0.0645574589148 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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