Some people think that success is most important in their life. Others think that it’s more important to be happy when they fail. Which idea do you agree with and why?
On the one hand, when people think of doing something, they never expect anything rather than success. I think this is because it’s actually part of nature. In other words, human beings are creatures that crave for success. Look at all those competitions that take place on a regular basis. Take World Cup for example. People from all over the world see different teams competing with each other only to see which one of them finally wins. Billions of dollars are spent over the course of four years to train a national team for a 90-minute match to only see whether or not it is able to make it to the final match. As absurd as it is, no matter how well you played or how hardworking a team was, it’s only the final score that matters to most people. To put it in another way, if a team wins, people think that they were the best. On the other hand, the loser is always put on the blame. Therefore, to be successful in a competition with another team is the most important issue for the majority of people.
On the other hand, I believe that failing is part of every competition. I mean sometimes you win, sometimes you lose and the thing that matters the most is to keep your head up, be happy and learn from your mistakes. In fact, you should fail to be able to climb the ladder of success. Take the same national football team in the World Cup as an example. If there are some issues with the tactics of the coach leading to a lost first match, it’s only through remaining happy and learning from their mistakes that the team is able to revive its lost self-confidence and get ready for the nest match. That way, they are able to identify their weakness, work on their tactics and finally hope to not repeat the previous match. When the time comes and they are on the pitch, with the hope coming from the happiness of their failure, they are able to put their heart and soul on the game and finally win.
The same perspective could be applied to people’s life. Sometimes you try your best to master and interview that leads to your dream job and you think you are the “most successful” person on earth since you could make it. And there are days in which you are not even the shadow of yourself in the job to which you were assigned. You shouldn’t give up and think that the world is over only because you weren’t successful in that job. I think what matters the most in life is to be able to cope with any situation. Therefore, I must admit the most important thing in life is to remain happy while you failed and try your best to win next time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 560, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
... team for a 90-minute match to only see whether or not it is able to make it to the final matc...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'mean'.
Suggestion: sometimes mean
...failing is part of every competition. I mean sometimes you win, sometimes you lose and the thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i mean, i think, in fact, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2092.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 481.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34927234927 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22290923366 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446985446985 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5700787606 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1666666667 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0416666667 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386166494226 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104328602235 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659004805071 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257963384534 0.150856017488 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508074560804 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.