Some people think that they can learn much more by themselves than if they work with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to get help from a skilled teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your choice.
Even though some people may state that they can learn by themselves by going through books, others think that the best option to acquire knowledge is by receiving it through teachers. In my opinion, learning with a teacher is much better than going by oneself because of the following reasons to be explored in this article.
First of all, teachers own plentiful knowledge as they have to study a lot to be in the position that they are. Some had to travel abroad to acquire such knowledge. For example, my Math teacher traveled all around the world to catch so much information to now convey to his students. He made copies of the original works of scientists from the past to further transmit to students. Therefore, this example explains why students should be assisted by teacher in order to get information.
Moreover, teachers have more experience of life to spread to their pupils. Not only have they been through books but also, they lived primordial moments in life that were required for accomplishing goals. For instance, more important than simply to look for books is to be in site and hear natives speaking about the history of the place and, that is exactly what my teacher physics told me when he was getting his master degree. He had to use a telescope to grab data for his thesis. Thus, this instance illustrates the desideratum to look for a teacher before taking any action.
Finally, I strongly believe that students may learn more from teachers than by themselves because teachers have more information to convey and also, they own experience of life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, speaking about, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 271.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81918819188 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.548306462 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579335793358 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9156985244 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.461538462 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.45110844103 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313401656654 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100675817235 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662423976983 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20306248951 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06376351488 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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