Many people welcome the opening of shopping areas near their homes. On the other hand, some people are strongly opposed to the construction of such facilities. If the opening of a large shopping center in your neighborhood were announced, would you support or oppose its construction? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Some people think that a large shopping is better to have nearby because they say that they do not need to travel long distances for shopping. However, others believe otherwise. They state that a large shopping may bring drawbacks. In my opinion, I think that a large shopping could cause problems for my neighborhood as I will discuss in this article.
First of all, many small markets would loose their clients and go bankrupcy . For example, there are many small businesses nearby my neighborhood and with the development of such shopping they would certainly run out of clients. Because there would exist lots of promotion and discounts and people would change the places to go for shopping. Thus, this instance illustrates how small markets would be affected by shopping areas.
Moreover, the shopping center would raze the green area in my neighborhood. For instance. in my village there are many small parks and there is no more space for anything and it would be impossible to construct a large shopping without eradicate the green places. Therefore, this example elucidates the damages caused by a big shopping center.
Finally, I strongly believe that a large shopping center would cause more damages than would bring benefits for my village because small businesses could break and green areas would have to be eradicated for the construction.
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Suggestion: lose
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 52.1666666667 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 223.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08520179372 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6268822212 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529147982063 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5481415052 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 5.45110844103 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263916293046 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104746444456 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493507934667 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176740765317 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213761111987 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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