Many of the people over eighteen years old study at university, some go to a small university while others prefer to attend a big university. What are the intangibles that make students decide to attend one rather than other? Therefore, if I were a student, I would strongly prefer to assist a big university.
First of all, going to study at a small university, one can go wherever they want because all buildings like classrooms or bars are close which helps when a student is late for the class. Furthermore, the professors can concentrate their attention on their few assistants because there are not a lot of students in each career, which can be helpful for the students' learning. Moreover, everyone knows themselves because there are few people, which helps to make friends and acquaintances for the future professional life. For example, my older sister, who attends a small university, knows many people from different careers, like lawyers and medicine, so she has a lot of friends.
However, attending a big university, a student has the opportunity to access a huge infraestructures in the campus such as library and cafeteria, where students can have meetings for having any conversation or for studying in groups. Besides, one can take the bus to go through the campus which helps to move on to distinct faculties. Also, one can know more people because there are a lot of students in one classroom, it is a good opportunity to make new friends. My own experience is a great example of this, when I was a bachelor’s student I attended a big university, so I always went with my classmates to the small mall, which was inside the campus, during break time; it was a good opportunity to have a distraction but we did not leave the university.
On one hand, students have easy access to buildings because they are close; nonetheless, there are buses which facilitate transportation to different faculties. On the other hand, professors can have a close communication with few students; but, students visit different places like libraries or internet coffee inside the campus where they can do their homeworks and research. By the same token, one knows the majority of students because it is a small place, nevertheless, one student can know more people of the same career because there are many students in the classroom.
To conclude, although attending a small university has its advantages, if I am forced to choose one, I would prefer to attend a big university which has some benefits like wide infrastructure, facilities in mobility and the opportunity to know more colleagues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, first of all, by the same token, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2178.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98398169336 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99086156391 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469107551487 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5524198984 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.2 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1333333333 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2666666667 5.45110844103 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216606736635 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897140915741 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869562613958 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169648542207 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114633867646 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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