Some students prefer classes with frequent discussions between the professor and with almost no lectures. Others students prefer classes with many lectures and almost no discussions. PREFERANCE
Everyone has their own preference for learning techniques. Some believe that interactive classes are more effective whereas some are of the opinion that theory lectures without any conversations are better. Of the given choices, if I were asked to choose, I would definitely prefer classes with discussions. I feel that way for two reasons, which I will explain in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, intellectual classes provide students with the opportunity to speak and represent their views on a topic. Moreover, such lectures will be less boring as there will interactions in class and the class would be lively as everyone will participate. For such discussion lectures the pupils have to explore the ideas and gain their knowledge by gathering information. This helps students to find information and present their point. Drawing from my own experience, our TOEFL teacher gives us a topic everyday and we have to go prepared next day then she discusses the topic with various activities and questions. In this way, she also completes the learning and the class is also not monotonous. If I had not attended her classes then I would still be struggling with the basics.
Secondly, the classes that involves interactions also prepares children on how to work in groups and how to present our point effectively when working in groups. It also teaches students on how to communicate with teachers,colleagues and friends. Some freshmen are very shy and speak very less when they go to college, but after interactions with professors and peers and participating in various activities they develop the skills. My personal experience is great example of this, I use to speak very less during my highschool but then in college I participated in various debates and elocution competitions which helped me to come up with my fear of speaking in front of many people. This helped me a lot in my professional life as i was able to be part of group discussions easily. If i would have never got such opportunity then I would never be able to overcome my stage fear.
In conclusion, I strongly prefer that classes including of discussions and interactions are more preferable than the passive classes with only lecturer speaking as this classes will help students to grow academically and develop the skills that are helpful in future.
- All high school students should be required to have three years of studying a foreign language Agree Disagree 60
- All high school students should be required to have three years of studying a foreign language Agree Disagree 60
- Some students prefer classes with frequent discussions between the professor and with almost no lectures Others students prefer classes with many lectures and almost no discussions PREFERANCE 90
- Toefl writing task one 3
- Some people want to have a job where they can make or do things with their hands Others prefer having a job where they can works with their heads and thinking Which type of job do you prefer 76
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...and develop the skills that are helpful in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, whereas, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06735751295 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97555974749 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523316062176 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8823109534 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320383145734 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101991533234 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868230007696 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231489662235 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08639830411 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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