Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In recent times, there has been a widespread debate on the benefit of sport for young children. Personally, I think there are many advantages and disadvantages of doing exercise at this age.
To begin with, one of the critical benefits of practicing sport for teens is being in good health. Doing regular exercise allows our body to burn more calories and stay in good shape. There are many studies say that the main reason behind obesity in most children is the unfavorable lifestyle such as sitting a long time in front of the TV and not practicing any kind of exercise. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was eight years old, my weight was 200 pounds. I had very severe obesity because I was spending most of my time playing video games at home. Moreover, I did not practice sport for almost three years because whenever I started doing that my obesity held me back. I had short breathing and I used to feel tired with any activity that required physical movement. Therefore, I did not have a healthy shape at all. Furthermore, avoiding practicing any kind of sport allow teens to be vulnerable to many critical diseases such as heart failure and diabetes. These invasive diseases can destroy children life and prevent them from enjoying their future because they have to adapt themselves to new life habit by taking some medications and avoid eating much food. Indeed, practicing sport has many health benefits for most young children.
On the other hand, practicing sport for a long time at this age might prevent children to focus on their study. They get distracted from studying their daily homework. For instance, my nephew Mohammed had the same experience. When he was at elementary school he used to spend most of his time playing basketball in the neighborhood’s gym. He used to come home late and tired, so he did not do his homework at all. As a result, he failed to succeed in school and he used to get very low grades. Obviously, practicing sport for a long time prevents children from succeeding in their education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ren from succeeding in their education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, i think, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75208913649 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65356265708 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545961002786 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2339159875 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2380952381 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0952380952 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09523809524 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198825285147 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596986047088 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482486046785 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142344829096 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00419262698034 0.0645574589148 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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