some young children spend a great amount of time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Practicing sport is crucial for our lives. When I was a kid, I used to play with my agemates far from my home, and my parents would tell me that they will not stop from playing, however, I had to make sure I come home on time and do other family and class activities. Like other activities, practicing sport as a child for most of the time has both advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly, practicing a sport for a great amount of time impact the health of a child. Once a child practices sport, he or she becomes a physical fit and far from noncommunicable diseases such as diabetes, cardiovascular diseases, and cancer. However, once a child spends his or her time practicing sport, one can be injured and get permanent disabilities or mental problems. I believe that for a child to practice sport is a good idea, although one needs to know what she or he is involved in.
Secondly, a child who practices sport performs well academically. Sport helps children to release stress, learn problem-solving skills, time management skills, and leadership skills that support their mental growth, hence, succeed in their studies. On the other hand, some children get addicted and miss time for class prep that would be profitable for their success. For this reason, parents need to know if their children practice sports and reserve time for their class preparation.
Thirdly, practicing sport aids children's social life. During sports activities, children build teamwork and tolerance spirit, friendship bonds, and trustworthiness that are necessary for one or live better lives with others. Contrary, some children do not preserve time to be with their family members, or time to participate in family activities like prayers, and ceremonies. Simply, children should practice sport in a possible time that allows them to have enough time with their family members.
In general, sport benefits children in various ways. It improves their health, academic performance, and social relationships. However, it leads to injuries, lack of enough time for a child's class and family-based activities. For these reasons, I hope for every child to get the time of practicing the sport with the help of their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, in general, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1129476584 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86904516116 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526170798898 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6343114324 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6842105263 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178659249609 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703400212748 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438934542018 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108685056604 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298635108415 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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